3185034 Actually it is possible....Just very hard to do. I can't name anyone who's done it, but I'm sure there are examples of such.
Though, to be blunt, if I was the ruler, I'd execute him. (Around sixty dead....And the destruction of a near complete ancient dragon, destroying years of scientific work...THAT IS HERESY! NO ONE MESSES WITH SCIENCE!)
Still, if all else fails, they can just hit him with the Elements of Harmony. That should do the trick of purifying him...or killing him. Whichever works.
3185381 You're welcome. Great story. Let's see how Alpharius deals with this.
I'm not really into Chaos Space Marines- I like my vanilla Space Marines, Ultramarines to be specific (although I also like the Black Legion and Slaanesh for some reason), but is it just me, or does every Marine of the Alpha Region have Alpha or Alpharius as their name? In honor of their Primarch, perhaps?
It has been forever since you updated I'm please with this.
Chaos is coming to the life's of the ponys all we become one with the dark gods and lets hope lord khorne has plans for Fluttershy to be a champion and Spike as well.
It is good to see this update keep it up and my the dark gods rule all over this land
Pulse I don't think you can convert chaos to normal there has been now books games or any thing on it but we will wait and see.
By the way damn it that he did not kill blueblood I want to see him get torn apart with a chain swords.
If you willingly gave your soul to chaos (like most CSM did at some point) there is no redeeming, but he is Alpha Legion and the Alpha Legion works in the most mysterious of ways, so mysterious in fact that noone knows what the Alpha Legion is doing not even the Alpha Legion itself. It is rumored that Alpharius, or maybe Omegon, knows what the original plan was but since he is currently unavailable and might or might not be dead there is no saying what is going on with them.
A knocked sounded from Twilight's door. Twilight sighed as she put down the her latest book, "Daring Doo and the Cursed Scroll of Ahriman", she was just getting to the best part.
3185034 The Dark Angels are known to be able to convert their fallen brothers back from Chaos, through what is heavily implied to be extensive torture. However the success rate of this is abysmally low, with their best at it having converted a whole TEN, over hundreds of years of trying. However the Whole Dark Angels chapter is extremely suspect, and the new lore with 6th ed seems to have written off the part of them "converting" fallen, Now just implying they're secretly at Legion strength, kill inquisitors who look too closely, and the fact that most(if not all) of the fallen aren't heretics in the first place. . .
3185406 The alpha legion is a bunch of tricky devils like that. The Legion is rumored to secretly have had 2 Primarchs who were twin brothers, looked, and acted Extremely the same as masters of deceptive warfare. To further the insanity, both were great tacticians, smaller than most Primarchs(like almost Space Marine sized), and implied to have surgically altered the entire legion to look just like them, so you'd never be able to figure out who was the Primarch. I can easily imagine a legion going to that insanity also giving all the marines names just like known Primarch to further confuse people.
I just read the story through for the first time. It is good so far though i am doubtful that Twilight will prevail.
I didn't think that Chaos Marines could remove their armor; I thought that is what fully integrated meant. Something to do with augmenting the body that the Emperor of Man gave you and a dash of heresy. I am a little fuzzy on the details myself.
I do have to admit that i am a bit off put by the cowardice of the Chaos Marine. He spent the first two chapters and a bit of the third running away from everything. Though i am sure that CMs are capable of tactical strategies i would just assume that they wouldn't use them unless they needed them. I wouldn't think that ponies would have offered a big enough threat to run away from.
But who is to say what it what in a fan-fic other than the writer.
But, just as an observation (and purely a joke), i would have titled this "The Cowardly Chaos Marine and the Phlegmatic Princess".
"Even a pony like him can be reformed, just like you were. You've seen his mind, he was just mad that someone took his possessions. He just need to be taught that there are better reactions to the situation," Celestia said hopefully.
3192739 Unlike most of the other Chaos Space Marine Legions, the Alpha Legion rarely operates within the Eye of Terror. unmutated Power Armor is removeable. there are still mutations but it's considered the least mutated legion because they prefer to avoid the Eye of Terror which causes most of the mutations you hear about from the Black Legion, Thousand Sons, and Word Bearers.
Also it seems you don't understand Alpha Legion too well. They are not your typical (chaos) space marine, they prefer to avoid direct combat. Using subterfuge, sabotage, brainwashing, and meticulous multi-year plans to destroy their enemies as opposed to a simple attack. They are so secretive that even the canon lack information on the Alpha Legion.
In the siege of Tesstra Prime, the Alpha Legion allowed the enemy to dig in and make defenses just so they can take them apart in a number of different ways before taking them out and capturing the Capital. When asked why the Legion had not taken the simpler strategy, Alpharius is reported to have replied that they avoided it as "it would have been too easy."
I will have to look into the Alpha Legion. I am not real familiar with the legions of chaos. I thought they were just what was left of the Emperor's Children and maybe some of the Iron Warriors after they entered the Eye of Terror. Being twisted by both the Warp and maybe Fabius I thought they all looked like this:
3186073 You guys would love that wouldn't you 3185486 I believe he was busy hiding under his bed during the event 3186095 Working on this is a bit slow for me, since there are a more than a few times that I get stuck trying to figure out how to write the next part, and if it will fit well.
He still needs to die,and Spike needs to be a champion of Khorne theirs too many fics where him or any of the main six fight chaos instead of embracing chaos.
Embrace it will YOU!
By the way keep it up cant wait for the next chapter.
3266086 personally I feel bad for not posting for a while, I know the feeling of a story that you really like but it updates so SLOWLY, and every time you check there's nothing and eventually drop it. That's what to me with Naruto and Bleach, and I don't want this to be a waste of people's time. I'm very happy that for my first story post EVER it's receiving praise and I like each of my readers. They get a story to read, and in turn, I get to hear feedback and enjoy writing, determined to make something worth while for my readers and followers -Much Love
Seriously though thats me right now..waiting for a story to update on fanfiction.net...its taking forever(a raptors family by slice141) im slices pre reader but he updates slowly but i know why and can understand slow updates :P id rather slow and good then fast and hasty..
i dont think you can convert from chaos, there was never any mention in the games articles or books. this will be interesting!
A Alpha Legion marine vs Twilight... I sense a question war beginning soon.
3185034 Actually it is possible....Just very hard to do. I can't name anyone who's done it, but I'm sure there are examples of such.
Though, to be blunt, if I was the ruler, I'd execute him. (Around sixty dead....And the destruction of a near complete ancient dragon, destroying years of scientific work...THAT IS HERESY! NO ONE MESSES WITH SCIENCE!)
Still, if all else fails, they can just hit him with the Elements of Harmony. That should do the trick of purifying him...or killing him. Whichever works.
3185237 I'm glad you chose my story to read please comment any of your thoughts
3185243
First off... the term for a creature of a warp is a daemon, not a deamon.
Second, have fun converting a Chaos Space Marine.
Third, I call ten seconds until Twilight faints.
Twas a good chapter, but there were a few minor grammar errors. Other then that..... EXCELLENT!!
3185297 fixed, thanks for the heads up, sometimes I mess that up when I'm typing too much and miss something during my proof-reading
3185319 the small things always messes with me
3185381
You're welcome. Great story. Let's see how Alpharius deals with this.
I'm not really into Chaos Space Marines- I like my vanilla Space Marines, Ultramarines to be specific (although I also like the Black Legion and Slaanesh for some reason), but is it just me, or does every Marine of the Alpha Region have Alpha or Alpharius as their name? In honor of their Primarch, perhaps?
It has been forever since you updated I'm please with this.
Chaos is coming to the life's of the ponys all we become one with the dark gods and lets hope lord khorne has plans for Fluttershy to be a champion and Spike as well.
It is good to see this update keep it up and my the dark gods rule all over this land
Pulse I don't think you can convert chaos to normal there has been now books games or any thing on it but we will wait and see.
By the way damn it that he did not kill blueblood I want to see him get torn apart with a chain swords.
Please continue.
Alpharius converts the ponies to chaos
3185396 we need updates
~nightmare
If you willingly gave your soul to chaos (like most CSM did at some point) there is no redeeming, but he is Alpha Legion and the Alpha Legion works in the most mysterious of ways, so mysterious in fact that noone knows what the Alpha Legion is doing not even the Alpha Legion itself. It is rumored that Alpharius, or maybe Omegon, knows what the original plan was but since he is currently unavailable and might or might not be dead there is no saying what is going on with them.
Ahriman?
As in Ahzek Ahriman?
This must have been planned....
3187953 "Keikaku Dorhri"
3185034 The Dark Angels are known to be able to convert their fallen brothers back from Chaos, through what is heavily implied to be extensive torture. However the success rate of this is abysmally low, with their best at it having converted a whole TEN, over hundreds of years of trying.
However the Whole Dark Angels chapter is extremely suspect, and the new lore with 6th ed seems to have written off the part of them "converting" fallen, Now just implying they're secretly at Legion strength, kill inquisitors who look too closely, and the fact that most(if not all) of the fallen aren't heretics in the first place. . .
3185406 The alpha legion is a bunch of tricky devils like that. The Legion is rumored to secretly have had 2 Primarchs who were twin brothers, looked, and acted Extremely the same as masters of deceptive warfare. To further the insanity, both were great tacticians, smaller than most Primarchs(like almost Space Marine sized), and implied to have surgically altered the entire legion to look just like them, so you'd never be able to figure out who was the Primarch. I can easily imagine a legion going to that insanity also giving all the marines names just like known Primarch to further confuse people.
I just read the story through for the first time. It is good so far though i am doubtful that Twilight will prevail.
I didn't think that Chaos Marines could remove their armor; I thought that is what fully integrated meant. Something to do with augmenting the body that the Emperor of Man gave you and a dash of heresy. I am a little fuzzy on the details myself.
I do have to admit that i am a bit off put by the cowardice of the Chaos Marine. He spent the first two chapters and a bit of the third running away from everything. Though i am sure that CMs are capable of tactical strategies i would just assume that they wouldn't use them unless they needed them. I wouldn't think that ponies would have offered a big enough threat to run away from.
But who is to say what it what in a fan-fic other than the writer.
But, just as an observation (and purely a joke), i would have titled this "The Cowardly Chaos Marine and the Phlegmatic Princess".
(ultra low quality)
3191006 Alright. Thanks.
3192739 Unlike most of the other Chaos Space Marine Legions, the Alpha Legion rarely operates within the Eye of Terror. unmutated Power Armor is removeable. there are still mutations but it's considered the least mutated legion because they prefer to avoid the Eye of Terror which causes most of the mutations you hear about from the Black Legion, Thousand Sons, and Word Bearers.
Also it seems you don't understand Alpha Legion too well. They are not your typical (chaos) space marine, they prefer to avoid direct combat. Using subterfuge, sabotage, brainwashing, and meticulous multi-year plans to destroy their enemies as opposed to a simple attack. They are so secretive that even the canon lack information on the Alpha Legion.
In the siege of Tesstra Prime, the Alpha Legion allowed the enemy to dig in and make defenses just so they can take them apart in a number of different ways before taking them out and capturing the Capital. When asked why the Legion had not taken the simpler strategy, Alpharius is reported to have replied that they avoided it as "it would have been too easy."
3194153
I will have to look into the Alpha Legion. I am not real familiar with the legions of chaos. I thought they were just what was left of the Emperor's Children and maybe some of the Iron Warriors after they entered the Eye of Terror. Being twisted by both the Warp and maybe Fabius I thought they all looked like this:
i.imgur.com/xWbC11y.jpg
I will do more research.
3186073 You guys would love that wouldn't you
3185486 I believe he was busy hiding under his bed during the event
3186095 Working on this is a bit slow for me, since there are a more than a few times that I get stuck trying to figure out how to write the next part, and if it will fit well.
3252795
He still needs to die,and Spike needs to be a champion of Khorne theirs too many fics where him or any of the main six fight chaos instead of embracing chaos.
Embrace it will YOU!
By the way keep it up cant wait for the next chapter.
3252795At least you TOLD us you are trying to work on the story...very few OP's do that :c
~Nightmare
3266086 personally I feel bad for not posting for a while, I know the feeling of a story that you really like but it updates so SLOWLY, and every time you check there's nothing and eventually drop it. That's what to me with Naruto and Bleach, and I don't want this to be a waste of people's time.
I'm very happy that for my first story post EVER it's receiving praise and I like each of my readers.
They get a story to read, and in turn, I get to hear feedback and enjoy writing, determined to make something worth while for my readers and followers
-Much Love
3273744 You like me? D: D: D:
No my image has been ruined!(jk)
Seriously though thats me right now..waiting for a story to update on fanfiction.net...its taking forever(a raptors family by slice141) im slices pre reader but he updates slowly but i know why and can understand slow updates :P id rather slow and good then fast and hasty..
What is this heresy? No such legion has ever existed.
quick question i see that a new chapter was posted a few days ago but yet it is not here? what happen to it?