• Member Since 30th May, 2012
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Mr Foster


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My name is Verità, and I am an Assassin. The blade in the crowd. Death in plain sight. I have served under Luna for my entire life, and now my story is coming to a close. I shall share you the story of my life, and the death, hate, and violence that came with it.

This is my story.


*Note* This story is a side fiction to go with "Ombra della Lama" by Vedavyasa. A whole lot of credit goes to him. It takes place around 40 years before the first season starts, and few things you have to also know.

This is an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE, meaning some things will not be canon. If you want the full idea of how this universe is, go and visit Vedavyasa's blog. You'll find everything there. Link will be in all the chapters.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 6 )

FIRST!!!


I'm gonna put this in my read later list, see where it goes from there

Nitpicks and things I missed:

Chapter title should capitalised

"...standing in front of the powerful Princess Celestia with a sword to my throat."

"Trying to get off Cloudsdale..."

"...humongous guards to let me see the Princess."

"Sure, I knew it would hurt him, but I didn’t realize It would break open and give my hoof a straight shot to his brain."

"...took me to the edge of the Canterlot, which was a cliff overlooking the Everfree Forest..."

I noticed that you used Templar instead of Tempest during that fight scene.

1095774 Thanks for catching that for me:twilightsheepish:
Auto correct on Microsoft word kills me sometimes:ajbemused:

I just realized Ombra sounds very much like Sombra

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