Glad you worked in a brief mention of the Lunar Forge, also, heh, you got all three of the Captains damn good, though while brutally strong, Harbinger is the FAST member of the trio, whereas Barricade is the powerhhouse[most of Harbinger's muscles are in his legs, which he uses to run fast enough to keep up with Pinkie Pie, who's only that fast by defying physics].
Also, now I wanna see Harbiner take a cannon shot to the face and walk it off like a minor bruise.
I happy I decided to browse through the Human category. This is a very entertaining story and I love how you incorporate a song into each chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Shining Armor: Barrier warrior. Uses magic shields for both defense and offense, ranging from 'shield claws' to 'Shield Summons', such as forming a manticore or dragon entirely out of shield spells.
Barricade: Airborn Mighty Glacier. Capable of fast flight, but a brute in battle, able to take and deal powerful blows with complete and utter ease, believed strong enough to break down a ten foot thick concrete wall.
Harbinger: Lightning Bruiser. Not nearly as strong as Barricade, but capable of doling out heavy blows, whereas his main strength is being INSANELY fast, fast enough to create a sonic rainboom ON FOOT. He's often mistaken for teleporting when running at his top speed...because he's actually OUT RUN teleporters in the past.
It seems as if anybody who writes a Chess Game of the Gods fic is an excellent writer. (or just has really good proofreaders and editors) I've read about three others and they all were very well written. You seemed to have the most fun with it out of the others, other than Rust's and Blackwing's fics.
*puts on top hat and monocle* I readily await more chapters from you, sir.
Not my most seamless music incorporation, but I'm trying to put at least one song in every chapter.
Anyway, I have pie to eat.
Keep up the great work.
So water equals power/roid boost? Cool. Get Pegasi to stick a rain cloud over your head and you'll be invincible.
Ha! Ruining a moment, best thing to do.
921582 Water gives you wings! (Get it? Red bull reference.)
Glad you worked in a brief mention of the Lunar Forge, also, heh, you got all three of the Captains damn good, though while brutally strong, Harbinger is the FAST member of the trio, whereas Barricade is the powerhhouse[most of Harbinger's muscles are in his legs, which he uses to run fast enough to keep up with Pinkie Pie, who's only that fast by defying physics].
Also, now I wanna see Harbiner take a cannon shot to the face and walk it off like a minor bruise.
I happy I decided to browse through the Human category. This is a very entertaining story and I love how you incorporate a song into each chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
923751 I was trying my best not to describe them in detail, as I have NO IDEA what either of their personalities or tactics are.
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Shining Armor: Barrier warrior. Uses magic shields for both defense and offense, ranging from 'shield claws' to 'Shield Summons', such as forming a manticore or dragon entirely out of shield spells.
Barricade: Airborn Mighty Glacier. Capable of fast flight, but a brute in battle, able to take and deal powerful blows with complete and utter ease, believed strong enough to break down a ten foot thick concrete wall.
Harbinger: Lightning Bruiser. Not nearly as strong as Barricade, but capable of doling out heavy blows, whereas his main strength is being INSANELY fast, fast enough to create a sonic rainboom ON FOOT. He's often mistaken for teleporting when running at his top speed...because he's actually OUT RUN teleporters in the past.
MOAR PLOX!!!!!
It seems as if anybody who writes a Chess Game of the Gods fic is an excellent writer. (or just has really good proofreaders and editors) I've read about three others and they all were very well written. You seemed to have the most fun with it out of the others, other than Rust's and Blackwing's fics.
*puts on top hat and monocle* I readily await more chapters from you, sir.
Ahoy brother! i've finally gotten to reading this, all i can say is: dayum!
974476 Finally!
do moar of this nao plox
...How exactly?
Great chapter, I am really enjoying this story.
1140498 Tits, I was hoping no-one would notice that...
Like Pinkie, I know all, I see all. (But not really.)
plz sir, may i have sum moar?