Slicer Jen is called upon to reinforce the Everfree Rangers commanded by Captain John Davies. This is a background story for those interested in her history.
Great chapter. I was having a hard time finding the translation of coup de gras, because I've seen it and heard it before, but not even my French Idioms book had it which is odd, and google only gave me the direct translation which isn't very helpful so I had to ask my French teacher since I couldn't find it anywhere. But now that I know, good use of it, I must say.
7955628 Thankyou. I take special care with vocabulary to make sure I don't put off the reader with incorrect use or poor grammar. With that said, I am still a beginner writer and writing is tough. That particular term popped up now and then in my fencing career, so I felt safe using it.
Great chapter. I was having a hard time finding the translation of coup de gras, because I've seen it and heard it before, but not even my French Idioms book had it which is odd, and google only gave me the direct translation which isn't very helpful so I had to ask my French teacher since I couldn't find it anywhere. But now that I know, good use of it, I must say.
7955628 Thankyou. I take special care with vocabulary to make sure I don't put off the reader with incorrect use or poor grammar. With that said, I am still a beginner writer and writing is tough. That particular term popped up now and then in my fencing career, so I felt safe using it.
ok I can say you have pulled a super good chapter hear it is super strong and really builds Jen and her reasoning for what she is.
and I found the next mistake.
needs removed.
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don't know if this will help or not.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coup_de_gr%C3%A2ce