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Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's marriage was thought to be the happiest in Equestria, one that would last forever. But sadly it will not. Shining Armor lays dying in his bed. A strange illness has afflicted him and he does not have long. Despite warnings by the royal physicians, Cadance must go to see her beloved husband one more time.
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Well, I would say challenge succeeded, but you do realise that the coverart is one heck of a spoiler, right? Sure, I was expecting Chrysalis in the end, but it still defused some of the tension.
Also, if possible, will there be a follow-up? I'm really curious to see the reaction of the other princesses, especially Celestia's.
Truth to be told, I kept wondering why there was no mention of the Princesses being anywhere around Shining to help him out, but I can guess who was responsible for that... but again, I'm curious what the perpetrator will do now.
All in all, pretty good story, and curious for a possible follow-up.
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It is a good bet to think who kept the other Princesses away, one aspect of the challenge is to try and make the story as compelling as possible with how limited I make the words. And I chose the cover image because it has the best "I just killed you" face Cadance can give. I am aware of possible spoilers but felt it was worth the risk to draw reader attention.
As for a follow-up, I'm not too sure and will see how this story goes over.
Just Replace Canada with Cadence, and that's my reaction.
I didn't expext that... Lol
I was thinking... maybe Black Death?
And then the ending happened.
Woah, woah, woah, woah, wait! What the f!@& ?!
That ending hit me like a smack in the face. To be honest, I kind of needed a smack in the face.
This is an old marriage joke.
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at least 7 out of 10 times, covers on this site are either generic, custom made, or have absolutelly nothing to do with the plot. I'd think this story is safe enough
Geez, that was like a slap in the face.
Eh, just a slap on the wrist.
You get a like for subverting my expectations. Nice job.
"...is that I had...boneitis."
(Sorry, had to.)
It would be hilarious if twilight found out
Wow... just wow...