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Fix the punctuation in the long description, please.
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What spot is it?
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My name is Smoke Pipe let's just say my mother wasn't a smart mare. I am known to many of the old world as a private Detective. During that faithful morning. I was hunting a very old stallion that..I had been chasing for year's. Then the world started to burn he and I have been hunting each other for the past 200 year's. I wish to bring him to justice.
But a odd Black Orb that looks like a memory orb was given to me..By a mare on the run..from some unsavory ponies. Known as the Black Aces. Welcome to a part of Equestira known as Wymarnic. A calm mountain part of Equestria. I walk the roads of this small part of Equestria that is mostly controlled by gangs..The lavender crew. The Black Aces, The chain boys, and the Black Stripes.
I learn that this Orb holds the key to why Equestria's army fired on their own in this area of Equestria and why they refused to help us here.
Needs more commas. Also, three dots for a ..., not two.
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Alright all done thank you. Took me awhile but I got it done.
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Nice, liked and followed.