Enjoying this a lot so far. Keep up the good work!

There were almost 60 people reading this chapter just now. Ho. Lee. Cow. I haven't seen a number that big in a while. Keep up the great work! It would seem that a lot of folks are enjoying this fic. I know I am.

This is adorable. These (almost) daily updates have been some of the highlights of my week.

“Just don’t be surprised when you wake up blue tomorrow…”

*Bonetrousle intensifies* Nye-he-he! You're blue now! That's my special attack!

Their interactions are so Sun damned Sweet it hurts.

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A friendshipping is fine too

Amazing chapter, i have been checking the live reader count for more than half an hour now and its yet to drop below 45 and has even risen to 70 active readers and its holding strong on about 45-55 for a while now

this story has really caught the eye of alot of people on FIMfiction, and its popularity can only rise with the chapter releases. It is still proudly displayed on the main page of FIMfiction. A gem like this is a joy to read and i hope many others agree with me

Very well done, be proud that you got this story out in the open and people are greatly enjoying it, if you had any beta readers tell them that they did a good job or if you yourself did it simply bravo!!

Wish i could favorite multiple times!

I know this is written as a smut story but damn if it doesn't feel like a romance or a drama.

It's well written, it flows from scene to scene very nicely and I can't help but squee at the many sweet moments throughout.

It's one of the few stories in which I'll keep refreshing my feed hoping for an update. The style kinda reminds me of Flammenwerfers content and that's some of my favourite shit right there.

I know you don't need my approval to keep writing but you definitely have it.

“It was… just a kiss,”

How did it end up like this?

nice chapter update soon

SO...
FREAKING...
ADORABLE!

I suddenly find myself worried for Twilight. Will she herself ever find love?

Twilight, nearly falling out of your chair, quickly sat up straight

I think the chair belongs to Twilight, not me.

Chapters to long.

It's supposed to be smut, but it's so full of d'aww and cute .... !!!

You are going to gain serious popularity with this story. Incredibly well written chapters on a near daily basis in a story that pulls you in for the plot and not just the clop. Stories like this (complete one's that have not been abandoned) are few and far between and are what I spend most of my time on fimfiction looking for.

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It was only a kiss

IT WAS ONLY A KISS

Maximum adorbs.

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More words is good.

I have to say, these are the types of plot clop I'm always looking for, the pacing is excellent and not rushed like most clop. I'm a fan of your previous works as well and I know this will be another great one.
out of

7765898 No large chapters not good. More words good but not all at once.

I was having, and still have, a very depressing day..but after reading this, you´ve made my day a bit more tolerable.
So thank you for that and keep up the good work :)

D'AWWWWW

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I think the chair belongs to Twilight, no me.

Did you seriously just make a grammatical error whilst trying to correct someone else's writing? Simply inexcusable, my good sir.

7765842 Came for the smut, stayed for the excellent story/writing/humor/everything!

7766076 Eh, it comes with typing on a mobile device.

I love this story a lot this story always makes my day all the time keep it up my friend and I'll b waiting for more uploads take ur time

Awww ahahahaww, niceness man, haha
Nice job on this.

Lovely scenes

Wow. Just wow. Good build up, stellar character creation. Just. Wow.

I love this story!

Loving it. Keep it going.

These are the stories I come to fimfiction for. The ones that actually manage to capture realistic, blossoming love.

Loving the story so far. Wondering when Jon would get to the kissing part.

One correction.

She trailed off when she saw grins coming to her hecklers faces.

hecklers'

All of my yes!

You sir, know to write romance, that, that right there is how stories about romance and friendship should be build

so much yes! loving it so far.

7765839 More like chapters too short. I could read this all day.

This story earns the shit out of that romance tag.

7765902 Maybe you only think so because you suck at english.

I spy with my weary eye, a pony booping simulator joke.

Holy. Fuck.

I'm loving this story so much it hurts. I love Jon's interactions with Celestia and Twilight. I like how they are pprtrayed. I like how damn real and believable their turmoil and fears are. Celestia is freaking adorable and lovable. The pacing is nice and endering. Twilight obviously gets off on that shit.

And now I'm sad that I lack the talent to make something with this quality. I know romance isn't my forte, not by a long shot, but it still saddens me.

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7765839 Excuse me? Too long? These chapters don't even reach the 8k count. You would absolutely hate my stories for how long my chapters tend to be.

These chapters are perfect for this story. Neither short, not long. Just enough.

After a re-read, I can confirm this is a good story and you should feel good.
Pacing is perfect, characters are very well done, and the dialogue is a joy to read.
And you didn't even have to involve chess.

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Eh, long chapters good. Make story last longer.
Your ability to word, english, and grammar not good, like too short chapter.

7766904 mYs ENLISH NO BAD! Eyes speinking good! So many flank hurt because I like shorter chapters? Did I say the story was bad? No. Did I down vote it? No. Do I like that story? Yes. Now as for the grammar and speech Nazi's Go buck yourselves.

This is too cute and adorable, I just can't stop reading. Please keep going!

7766904 Double points because English is your second language.

Because I can and the fact that we haven't gotten a scene like this yet irks me.

Jon was awoken, once more, by the smell of ozone and the delicate first light of day creeping in through the window. Celestia felt him stir and giggled as he grumbled and complained, burying his face under her wing, his hot breath tickling her side. "And good morning to you too, Jon," she whispered. Jonathon grunted his acknowledgement, peeking out from under the bedding and feathers. Ignoring the silly human for now, she looked over to Twilight, who had once again fallen asleep on her little stool, haphazardly wrapped in a blanket. Jon wriggled about some more, before sitting up in bed. He looked curiously at Celestia, following her gaze to where Twilight slept.

"Ah, she stayed up late again, didn't she?"

"Indeed. I do wish she realises that she doesn't have to document everything, perhaps your theory earlier was not so far from the mark."

"Huh." Jon replied. He rolled out of bed, his tired muscles screaming in protest, the chilly morning air quickly sapping away the comfortable warmth Celestia provided, and walked over to the sleeping unicorn. He crossed his arms, looking at her pensively for a moment before snapping his fingers, a sneaky grin on his face. Celestia watched, puzzled, as he very carefully wrapped his arms around Twilight, blanket and all, and lifted her off the ground. Her face scrunched slightly and she shifted about, but did not wake. With the greatest of care, Jon brought her to the side of the bed, and gestured to Celestia with his head, not willing to talk and risk waking Twilight. Celestia smirked, lifting away the blankets and Jon deposited her in Celestia's waiting open hooves, before snuggling up to her from the other side and pulling the covers back over. Twilight sighed appreciatively and wiggled unknowingly closer to Celestia. She had to hold back a chuckle. Stretching her wing so it covered the pair she rested her head back down on the pillow. "She'll be livid when she wakes up, you know that, right?" Celestia whispered

"Maybe, but it'll be worth it to see the look on her face." Jon replied.

Celestia just shook her head. "It's your funeral, I just hope none of the guard feel like walking in, this will be difficult to explain." But alas, Jon had already dozed off again. Celestia quickly joined him.

I enjoy messing with Purple Smart.

7766918 Yeah, caught it too.

The romance feels a little rushed, like it's too soon for them to be this far in the relationship. Other than that, it's still pretty cute.

7767378 a nice addition to all of that. The scene I imagine with that text ist just so cute it is almost lethal
Also who wouldn't want to snuggle a little bit with purple smart?

this is no simple clop fic. this is almost a romance novel. anyone agree with my statement.