A boring life on your lonesome, a shitty job and terrible apartment... How will you all react when that's all taken away?
YES! PLEASE NO LONG WAIT TIMES AGAIN
Not errors per se, but several times in this chapter, the phrasing just feels off.Also:
"Careful with that, ya blitherin' idiot!" A thick and heavy Irish feminine accent
That seems more like a Scottish accent to me.
9092679Prolly is a Scottish Accent now that I think about it... May need to remember my accents.
Any criticism is welcome though, thanks for the input.
YES! PLEASE NO LONG WAIT TIMES AGAIN
Not errors per se, but several times in this chapter, the phrasing just feels off.
Also:
That seems more like a Scottish accent to me.
9092679
Prolly is a Scottish Accent now that I think about it... May need to remember my accents.
Any criticism is welcome though, thanks for the input.