A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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Hmm, a shaky yet peaceful first contact, that's good. None of that edge lordy shit or sudden bout of cowardice/timidity from the MC, she kept her shit in check and breezed past the first hurdle. *Holds up an 8 sign*
I wish I could like this more than once.
technically correct all the races are sentient, however all animals are also sentient the word that should be used here is sapient
2 updates in 2 days?I feel spoiled.
Great work keep it up.
You can do it.
She didn't have extra clothing?
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They took all of her stuff....
You know, if someone wanted to study my stuff, like my MacBook, IPhone, my Dodge Charger (police hemi), and guns.
I'll be so pissed that I'll might even put someone in a coma.
Yeah, probably.
*sees big ass needle* NOPE!
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This part was perfect. Funny, but not too ridiculous a response. Some HiEs are just sooo over-the-top about it that it's groan-worthy. This was just the right balance between ambivalence and panic.
So far...
...I think you forgot the comedy tag, I was literally LOLing several times during this chapter .
...Although I appreciate all involved characters, especially Sarah and Twilight, to be really sharp and use a lot of deduction, I think it might be slightly overdone with Twilight, even if her IQ is 150+. Still better than the usual first contacts I remember in this regard. It's always interesting to describe items that seem really common to us as if you encounter them the first time in your life. I think I've never read something handling this topic in a better way.
...Sarah bouncing between threats and cuddles confused me a little bit as well as the nurse nearly crying and seconds later being in "bossy nurse" mode again.
...The guys torturing their cellos must have been Apocalyptica .
...Having no password on the phone is for sure unthinkable but what the heck, it would have ruined the scene. But I wonder why none of them commented on the bad sound quality of that device (cell phones).
...I loved Twilights nerdy antics in ths chapter, I hope there will be more of this .
...normally I don't like main characters with army backgroud but let's see how things go on.
Hee, author apparently didn't knew that we in our time have wireless heart monitors like that with tony sensor being glued or strapped to somewhere it won't be a nuisance, and she is in future. If anything, her own leg should have diagnostic bus and any device hooked to nerves would receive pacekeeper pulses
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*did the ponies know about this? No? Then shush*
I am an adult!
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What Ponies know is irrelevant in this case. Times when heart monitors are mandatory wired to patients are in past or are limited to cases when small fluctuations must be watched. And she is future. Probably loopy though.