The Doctor a Time Lord who had been through hell the multiverse practically hates him and after an accident he ends up in Ponyville and finds a mare that could change his life all the way around.
Yay first story. Be gentle with me 
I'm also using a phone so it may be different than other fimfictions.
Rated teen for suggestive themes(this may change to mature), swearing, an obscene about of game references and a lot of unnecessary fluff
Tags will be added as the story goes on, may have a bit of OOC in some chapters, also has shipping of OC's.
This is not in the same timeline as Doctor Who however elements of it has been borrowed from it but will be changed to the way I see fit if it's too much like the original.
Chapters (2)
Yeah... first few words I really didn't like it. Maybe it's because I'm not the Doctor Who fan I used to be, but if you're using a phone to write this, you need to stop, get a computer and keep going from there.
I'm not saying the writing was completely horrid. But it kind of rubbed me the wrong way. To the point where I skipped the entire chapter to write this. And... you don't specify which doctor it is.
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My doctor isn't any of the Doctor's from the original everything will be explained in the next chapter I promise.
I also know that I need a computer badly.
I also know that my writing isn't the greatest thing in the world but I hope to get better with time.
7587194 Don't worry, I can see you have some raw talent. Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll get better.
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I will thank you for the comments and I will say the only reason why I got this done is because of Google docs.
I know I have talent as well but I just don't know what went wrong
Nice chapter! A bit fast, but it's good!
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I'm taking my time on the next chapter I don't know when it will be up though since my birthday is so close.
7620130 Ah, happy birthday! Mine is relatively close as well!
I really enjoyed this so far and look forward to the upcoming chapters. (There is more, right?) Anyway, keep up the good work.
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There's more I'm not close to dying yet anytime soon I'll turn seventeen this next Sunday
YOU SHALL GET MOAR!! MOAR!! MMOOAARR!!!!
For a first not bad. I would recommend a proof reader which we are all available. Other then the chapter having a few rough spots, (which is why I recommended the proof reader), I would say it is interesting. But like all readers now we are interested to see more. However let me be the first to like and favorite your story. Keep on writing.
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Your wish is within my power
A computer or a blue tooth keyboard. That would make typing easier.
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Only problem is that I'm broke as hell but I've gotta do what I've gotta do