A man is sent to a strange world as a shapeshifter after failing to listen to the internet. He does his best to make the most out of his new life. Although there are some who just can't leave well enough alone.
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Yay
Really nice hope it will go on for a while
*slow clap* I like this story, little overly common start but jumped of the Gary stu train very quickly. Good work.
*insert meme here*
I have to say. Making Jekyll play the "Cursed with immortality" card in genius
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Ha! These bring back memories.
One day I’ll get around to fixing the first couple chapters.
Make em’ look like less of a dumpster fire. xD
Now, were did I come in....?
Previous chapter you said Jek landed in Equestria recently after Celly imprisoned Luna. Get that straightened out, will you?
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He is working on re-writing the entire story. git gud skrub.
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I didn't actually care about the issue personally, I fully realized what he was doing. I was not criticizing or pettily heckling him, my single reason was merely to remind him of the matter, regardless of how useful my input would be or not, because I was fully aware of how easy it is to forget one of the hundreds of things someone needs to fix during a planned rewrite.
Now if I came off as rude to the author, I'm sorry. If I came off as rude to you however, I don't care. You can go ahead and take your likes and edgy friends with you on your way to fuck off, because I know for a fact that you were genuinely being as rude as you were making me out to be.
Yeah, watching the griphon you pulled the head off of pick said head back up and reattach it would freak anyone out that hasn't seen crazier.
For something labeled comedy this has precious little of it. I would suggest you add something here about his head swearing as his body stumbled around trying to find it, maybe have the head continuously yelling obscenities at its body every time it misses his head. Then when luna asks how that’s possible, have him respond with a grouchy old man saying, “I was cursed to walk this stupid piece of shit land before you even existed, kid. I remember being entirely unimpressed by your little tantrum. Now get the fuck out of my town.”
So he is literally 'banished from death', like my boi Talion
“Twilight, I am over a thousand years old. It’s no legend, I was there. And unless something unexpected happens, both Celestia and Luna will die tonight,” I lied sadly.
1000 year old griffen...Right! nothing weird about that, oh right a curse, I'm calling shenanigans!
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I am going to have to disagree. I feel that bit is perfect as it is.
If this was dark souls ill call the curse darksign
Brilliant chapter! Love it ♡♡♡♡♡
I feard for best Princess. Hope Luna will survive.
Badass show. Chuck Norris would draw his hat im sure! Magnificent storyline!!!
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