You're getting better with writing, but the actual content is still just a collection of you copying other people's work.

Not bad. Not bad at all. I don't understand where all the negative ratings are coming from but dont take them to seriously. You have some real potential here. I'm curious where you'll go with crosstech as well. You've got my interest so don't leave me in too much suspense alright? :)

I'll admit that theres quite a few grammar errors and the like, but it's intresting. Interesting enough for me to ignore and keep in reading. Although I suggest coming up with something thats your own that fits into the FoE universe, spice things up a little.