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Anon Jams Out

You are Anonymous, only human in Equestria and roommate to Vinyl Scratch. You jam out, the only problem is, you love Octavia

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Tesla Moon

Tesla Moon #1 · Sep 22nd, 2016 · · · First Jamming ·

All over the place. It established the story line though so good job. Just try not to keep jumping like that. Give some internal diolalog or something. Average over all.

Dragon Slayer 657

Dragon Slayer 657 #2 · Sep 22nd, 2016 · · · First Jamming ·

7585606 Well, this is my first time wrighting a fanfic. Thanks for the info, I'll fix it when I get the chance

A random person

A random person #3 · Sep 29th, 2016 · · · A New Song ·

7585697 Theres a human in this story right? Theres no tag

Dragon Slayer 657

Dragon Slayer 657 #4 · Sep 29th, 2016 · · · A New Song ·

7605492 Thank you fir pointing that out. That could confuse people

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #5 · Sep 30th, 2016 · · · A New Song ·

Shouldn't Anonymous get an OC tag?

Dragon Slayer 657

Dragon Slayer 657 #6 · Sep 30th, 2016 · · · A New Song ·

7605882 Walst I believe everyone is original I always saw Anonymous different character. A character that couldn't be labeled as.an."OC". I mean, I didn't make them up

Midnight Ronin

Midnight Ronin #7 · Mar 15th, 2017 · · · A New Song ·

I like what you got here, but it could use work. Might I suggest you use Google Docs when typing your fics? It will help out greatly. In fact I'm using it now.

Please continue with this fic.

SlckNck69

SlckNck69 #8 · Jul 26th, 2018 · · · A New Song ·

Sorry in advance. The is the first time I’m writing a comment on any stories . It seemed to be a little odd to me with it going in so many directions but it started getting better near the end. It sucks that you didn’t get to finish this story. I would have liked to have seen an ending where he gets more than he would have hoped for . It was still a good read for me anyway . Thanks 👍.