Hmmmm.. The translating is a little tedious might I suggest paraphrasing it?

7518412 Yeah, reading this on a tablet makes it pretty impossible to easily bounce back and forth between pages or copy/paste things. Suggest using brackets for the translation.

Partly seems a little cliché....

Otherwise interesting....

I'll keep my eye on this....

7518436 already added

7518457 which I at least thank you for

Good chapter can't wait for more

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So this is what you've been doing, kouhai...

7518786 yes, it's so far been better received.

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I hope this doesn't mean no more adventures for Archer... Kinda want to see shat she does with her new Sentai equipment.

Much better then the first unedited version 8/10.

7518838 eventually, my poor editors need rest after I released 6 chapters within a short amount of time.

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true... but I was referring to you cancelling that other story.

7518951 I only cancelled it temporarily as I was getting a huge amount of hate for it.

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Screw the haters!

7518995 write for you

please call me Silver Man

You missed an E

7524743 sigh dammit

Sits down with popcorn and soda. I look forward to the world and story you will weave.

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Question: Update?

7646743 see my last blog, though I have put off some writing for a while because I almost unwittingly provided a minor with a clopfic because the little fucker lied to me.

7646860 I read the note, and got to ask, how did you find out whoever was a minor ?

Well I had just discover this new story. And its AMAZING !!! I love it. So creatures and monsters from Dungeons & Dragons had somehow gotten into the world of MLP. Well if anyone who is not familiar with the various creatures, point them towards the Dungeons & Dragons wiki. It should help them, if they need a bit more info, or if you need to search for new creatures. Hoping for a quick update, if possible !!!

7728696 other people had been solicited by him on the site.

this is a great story, there arent many dragon stories.

More please

Well this is surprisingly good. Please write soon more

Ok I cant read this. Nothing against any sort of relationship but GOOD GOD this is just so horribly, HORRENDOULSY constructed its making me a bit ill. Its almost porn movie "Hello wanna bang?" bad!

I mean. there is no buildup, no investment, nothing that constitutes building any kind of relationship. Just instantly: YES YOU GIRLFRIEND NOW BECAUSE IM SEXY HURR HURR.

Good grief!

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Okay first off there is no sex, two you can ask to date someone or flirt with them without it being a porno, and three why the hell should I listen to the criticism of someone who hasn't written anything?