Principal Celestia just can't keep her hands off her students, or her futa member out of them. In this ongoing story, Celestia sinks deep into her student body's student bodies.
7483095 Thanks for taking the time to read and give your thoughts. :) Hopefully future chapters don't disappoint!
As for told by/with clop, I'm not sure where the early chapters will fall, but I like to think the middle ones lead more towards a bit of a story. Maybe even some suspense, kind of keeping people wondering just where it'll all go. But that's for people that read it to decide; I'll just put it out there and see where things fall. :)
I can definitely confirm that the girls join in under different circumstances. One is already seeing her, one is much more willing and eager, and in general there's a pretty wide mix. Hopefully it keeps you interested to continue!
Hmmmm, not sure that it was a good idea to send Sunset out with cum on her face, cum coating her clothes, and cum in her hair. Given that at this point Celestia might want to keep this under wraps till it comes to full completion. The leaking cum thing might be alright though, but yeah she was too covered in cum to be any kind of subtle.
7484246 The fact that Celestia isn't subtle at all becomes a bit of a plot point later, when one of the other administrators figure out just what she's been doing. :3
oh so this is finally out here as well, huh? been following the story for a while now on... a different site and I'm looking forward to the reactions on your work you'll get. guess it will be a while before i can expect anything new though, considering this is still a few chapters short.
7485233 I'm planning on updating this one with one chapter a day, with the expectation I'll be posting a whole new chapter either late this week or early next. :) So there's definitely a new chapter coming, and then thereafter it'll be a return to my original routine of updating it once a month. (The past few months hit me really hard scheduling wise.)
Okay, we've already established that you don't mind mildly harsh criticism. And I really did enjoy this, so here's the hard part.
I actually find this story more disturbing than "harder" stuff like Harshly Handled. Because...for some reason, even though this isn't labeled for mind-control or mindbreak, the girls just don't seem to care much that Celestia is nailing them unprotected. Sunset barely objects, the other girls even less so.
This is probably just me not suspending the right disbelief though. We have different kinks, I presume.
Really digging the way Celestia takes such control. It's all so matter-of-fact, that this is how things are and Sunset should just get used to being owned. There's a psychological element that I adore in these stories.
Yeah this is kinda mind-break, and a does in a way come across as kinda rapey. After all Celestia is threatening their education and futures if they don't get bred by her. And she is hell bent on breaking them till they beg her for the cock and beg to be bred by her. No matter what it takes.
Honestly, kinda hot, but at the same time I want to see her get her comeuppances.
Someone just pointed out the amber/peach color to me regarding Sunset. I didn't realize it at the time actually; she always just looked yellow to me. But if nothing else saying amber and peach sounds WAY better and it helps me skirt around the fact that calling someone yellow-skinned has some unintentional racist applications. >.>
Regarding the theme of the story, I can't really deny it. That's one of the reasons that Celestia starts softening up later on in the story, it's partly a response to those comments. Even if she's roaming around breeding as many gals as she likes and being a complete hedonist, I still want there to be some aspect of affection and maybe even romance in the story. Granted it's all academic at this point, I sadly haven't had a chance to update this one in far too long. :( Makes me the sad.
I feel you XD. Yeah, I read this (right now on Breeding Rainbow), and I can't help but feel a tinge of anger at Tia. I mean we really don't see affection from her. Other than that one time with Flutter's (which by her admission is a rarity), she refers to them as property, and thinks of them as nothing more than something to pleasure her and pop out as many babies as they can.
I personally like Luna better. She has all of what Tia should have towards her girls. Love, affection, respect, and their well being in mind. Rather than how she can break their minds to make them overly eager to pleasure her however / wherever.
Still I look forward to more of this (and I am sad too, that there isn't more. Although Tia becoming more like the one you made in the Twilight fic, would've been nice. Sure she was a Dom; but one we see that truly cares about her girls, and that their's quite a bit of affection there. That was an awesome one, and what I thought I'd be getting when I started this fic. This Tia ... is just dark tagged, and makes me a smidgen uncomfortable, I mostly keep at this to see her fall / comeuppances.).
7483046 That's totally fair, not everyone enjoys that angle. :) If you give some of my other stuff a chance, I hope it'll be more to your tastes.
7483095 Thanks for taking the time to read and give your thoughts. :) Hopefully future chapters don't disappoint!
As for told by/with clop, I'm not sure where the early chapters will fall, but I like to think the middle ones lead more towards a bit of a story. Maybe even some suspense, kind of keeping people wondering just where it'll all go. But that's for people that read it to decide; I'll just put it out there and see where things fall. :)
I can definitely confirm that the girls join in under different circumstances. One is already seeing her, one is much more willing and eager, and in general there's a pretty wide mix. Hopefully it keeps you interested to continue!
And thank your friend for suggesting it for me!
Was there any way that you could have not made this creepy. This is going to stick in my head like a fat spider and just repeat until I burn it out.
I can't wait for Fluttershy and all the potential kinky fuckery that awaits us. Yes, kinky fuckery.
7483115 Hmm. Drops that stuck instead of bits that clung?
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No it's the "Pretty young cheeks" bit.
I just hear that in the voice of an 80 year old man, soozled off his ass, hitting on young girls a quarter of his damned age.
"Hello you young, pretty, thing"
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*Stares and nods*
Aye, this one might be a double canner.
So this is molestia of chs
Hmmmm, not sure that it was a good idea to send Sunset out with cum on her face, cum coating her clothes, and cum in her hair. Given that at this point Celestia might want to keep this under wraps till it comes to full completion. The leaking cum thing might be alright though, but yeah she was too covered in cum to be any kind of subtle.
7484246 The fact that Celestia isn't subtle at all becomes a bit of a plot point later, when one of the other administrators figure out just what she's been doing. :3
7482053 your taking your clop to seriously
So is Twilight (pony) going to get punished for sneaking into her school without permission and running for fall formal.
oh so this is finally out here as well, huh? been following the story for a while now on... a different site and I'm looking forward to the reactions on your work you'll get. guess it will be a while before i can expect anything new though, considering this is still a few chapters short.
7485233 I'm planning on updating this one with one chapter a day, with the expectation I'll be posting a whole new chapter either late this week or early next. :) So there's definitely a new chapter coming, and then thereafter it'll be a return to my original routine of updating it once a month. (The past few months hit me really hard scheduling wise.)
I am loving this stern human celestia. it's interesting how much she does not give a shit. XD
I like the way of how things are showing a bit of difference....but now my question is...
will celestia even fuck her own sister as well in this story?
Okay, we've already established that you don't mind mildly harsh criticism. And I really did enjoy this, so here's the hard part.
I actually find this story more disturbing than "harder" stuff like Harshly Handled. Because...for some reason, even though this isn't labeled for mind-control or mindbreak, the girls just don't seem to care much that Celestia is nailing them unprotected. Sunset barely objects, the other girls even less so.
This is probably just me not suspending the right disbelief though. We have different kinks, I presume.
Really digging the way Celestia takes such control. It's all so matter-of-fact, that this is how things are and Sunset should just get used to being owned. There's a psychological element that I adore in these stories.
Sunset Shimmer is amber, or peach colored skin. Not yellow.
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Yeah this is kinda mind-break, and a does in a way come across as kinda rapey. After all Celestia is threatening their education and futures if they don't get bred by her. And she is hell bent on breaking them till they beg her for the cock and beg to be bred by her. No matter what it takes.
Honestly, kinda hot, but at the same time I want to see her get her comeuppances.
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Someone just pointed out the amber/peach color to me regarding Sunset. I didn't realize it at the time actually; she always just looked yellow to me. But if nothing else saying amber and peach sounds WAY better and it helps me skirt around the fact that calling someone yellow-skinned has some unintentional racist applications. >.>
Regarding the theme of the story, I can't really deny it. That's one of the reasons that Celestia starts softening up later on in the story, it's partly a response to those comments. Even if she's roaming around breeding as many gals as she likes and being a complete hedonist, I still want there to be some aspect of affection and maybe even romance in the story. Granted it's all academic at this point, I sadly haven't had a chance to update this one in far too long. :( Makes me the sad.
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I feel you XD. Yeah, I read this (right now on Breeding Rainbow), and I can't help but feel a tinge of anger at Tia. I mean we really don't see affection from her. Other than that one time with Flutter's (which by her admission is a rarity), she refers to them as property, and thinks of them as nothing more than something to pleasure her and pop out as many babies as they can.
I personally like Luna better. She has all of what Tia should have towards her girls. Love, affection, respect, and their well being in mind. Rather than how she can break their minds to make them overly eager to pleasure her however / wherever.
Still I look forward to more of this (and I am sad too, that there isn't more. Although Tia becoming more like the one you made in the Twilight fic, would've been nice. Sure she was a Dom; but one we see that truly cares about her girls, and that their's quite a bit of affection there. That was an awesome one, and what I thought I'd be getting when I started this fic. This Tia ... is just dark tagged, and makes me a smidgen uncomfortable, I mostly keep at this to see her fall / comeuppances.).