After three years of living in her run down house, Sunset finally has turned the shack into a home, so why not invite her best friends to come check it out? Too bad she forgot to mention one special detail about the place.
7532420 Jack* First off. Secondly, Jack is inspired by what was to originally be chapter four, that Bart had a darker side of him from his time alive, i.e. Jack the Ripper. I felt it was too dark though, and would cause WAY too many issues down the line, and scrapped it for the much more light hearted reveal of what Sunset has done to Bartholomew.
7532646 Sunset was nervous, and didn't really know how to introduce him, or how to do it smoothly. This is a subject that terrifies her, just like anything sexual with her friends, because she doesn't know what they'll think towards her afterwards. She did feel that AJ had to be informed, because she was the one that she expected to despise Bart the most if they simply met.
7532430 You know, it almost seems like 'Jack the Ripper' got split into two ghosts at death, one becoming Bartholomew who had more gentleness than fierceness, and one becoming Jack* who didn't care about his 'playthings'.
Or that would be what it would seem like if this wasn't non-canon.
7532728 And you would be fairly accurate if I had gone with my original idea. Jack used Bart as almost a Venus Flytrap, luring in ladies, and when they annoyed him, Jack would come out. But, alas, I want this to stay on the positive and smutty side of things.
Ok who's Jack
7532420 Jack* First off. Secondly, Jack is inspired by what was to originally be chapter four, that Bart had a darker side of him from his time alive, i.e. Jack the Ripper. I felt it was too dark though, and would cause WAY too many issues down the line, and scrapped it for the much more light hearted reveal of what Sunset has done to Bartholomew.
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Oh ok I get it
7532646 Sunset was nervous, and didn't really know how to introduce him, or how to do it smoothly. This is a subject that terrifies her, just like anything sexual with her friends, because she doesn't know what they'll think towards her afterwards. She did feel that AJ had to be informed, because she was the one that she expected to despise Bart the most if they simply met.
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You know, it almost seems like 'Jack the Ripper' got split into two ghosts at death, one becoming Bartholomew who had more gentleness than fierceness, and one becoming Jack* who didn't care about his 'playthings'.
Or that would be what it would seem like if this wasn't non-canon.
7532728 And you would be fairly accurate if I had gone with my original idea. Jack used Bart as almost a Venus Flytrap, luring in ladies, and when they annoyed him, Jack would come out. But, alas, I want this to stay on the positive and smutty side of things.
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If you ever wanted to write a darker style of this story, that would be an excellent concept to work with.
7532747 I'd rather do the Ghost Buster's Parody I outlined in the comments of this fic first.
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And having looked back and now seen that outline...
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I KNEW IT! YES!
7537556 Unfortunately, time, working on this, and other obligations are against me doing such a thing.
7537567 I ALSO KNEW IT! FUCK!