Okay, I've already read the first chapter of the story (I'm liking the premise a lot) and I must ask...
I'm not here to self promote (and if you feel like I am, you can delete this if you want, I won't complain), but was a fraction of this inspired by my story? I ask this because I can see some similarities between mine and yours, even the name of the military is nearly identical. And the year.
I'm not accusing you of copying me (rather I would love to see that I have, in a sense, inspired people to write their take on what happened), I'm just curious.
Ok... let's see
1 Do you have an editor?
1.1 You need one since i saw spelling errors enough to warrant an editor for this.
2 I like this story and i can see the potential in it.
2.1 I will follow this for now and hope to see more.
3 I can't be bothered to list the errors i saw here since i'm on my phone and it would take a little too long to list them all.
Hey dude, I can help with editing of you'd like. I can seeasily great potential for this story.
Okay, I've already read the first chapter of the story (I'm liking the premise a lot) and I must ask...
I'm not here to self promote (and if you feel like I am, you can delete this if you want, I won't complain), but was a fraction of this inspired by my story? I ask this because I can see some similarities between mine and yours, even the name of the military is nearly identical. And the year.
I'm not accusing you of copying me (rather I would love to see that I have, in a sense, inspired people to write their take on what happened), I'm just curious.