The Abyss
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Great story. ~hug
Another steamy fic, done tastefully well!
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Thanks guys!
7527863 Sure, no problem! I love a good clopfic from time to time.
Noice
is there going to be a sequel
Great story, steamy but tasteful, and pretty much the only story with incest that I have liked.
(Have given up on pretending I don't read clop...)
Yup, as everyone has said prior, a really good clop fic. Now the big question is, will there be a sequel?
Oooh, this was a good read. It's been far too long since I've read an enjoyable Flitter x Cloudchaser clopfic, and this one certainly delivered. Keep up the good work, Abyss.
~SolidFire
7528251 Will do!
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7527920 If I think it does well enough, of course! But instead of a sequel, I'd just mark the story as incomplete and keep writing the story.
7528312 yay
Well it is good to see that the girls are finding their special someponies. It just makes me sad that all the supposed "stallions" in town where just after sex. I am sure Big Mac would have never asked such a question.
As always you do a really good job! It's also rare to see an incest fic end in romance so that was a nice twist.
Very nice. Been far too long since I've seen a good Flitter and Cloudchaser fic. I hope you decide to keep it going!
7528312 Sweet!
7528562 I agree, I don't think Big Mac is that kind of stallion. He was probably just one of the ones, as Flitter put it: 'cuties', who are already taken. Given how shipping seems to go for him in this fandom, I would actually be more surprised if he wasn't.
This was actually a pretty good read, a little steamy, yet kinda cuddly at the same time. I do hope you add a little more to this, I am interested in seeing where this could potentially go if investigated further.
The last sentence in the long description goes on for way too long.
7529827 Yeah, I suppose it is. Thanks for pointing that out.
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That looks much better.
All of my yes
love the fic like always made me cum in 20 seconds flat lol
PS. thank you now, my bed sheets are all wet!!!!
Ah, the love of sisters. I'd say the taboo of the act could have been emphasized a little more; didn't feel as naughty as it could have been. It was still a hot read and tribbing, even though a dildo was involved, is something sorely absent. I was taken out when she started deepthroating the dildo so quickly however because all I could think about was this.
static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/130da6eb88287f469459044913d6bff6.jpg
Pop culture always holds more sway over my mind.
Haven't even started reading and it's already one of my favourite stories.
Edit:Not quite what I imagined, but the rest more than makes up for it, definitely my new favourite.
More please!
That was sweet, and the internal dialogue was a nice look into how they were feeling.
7530363 The video I'm about to display is pretty much the only way I can say this is good.
Cute and hot :3
Okay, a problem. You were running through this from the start. During openings and expositions, slow your style a bit and ease into the clop before you hit the gas. This story just felt rushed. That being said, that was cute and hot and I am going to read it again. Have a like.
You mean, they won't go on a date?
Hot, cute, looking forward to more is there is to be!
7532755 No, her newfound feelings of love wouldn't fade away.
With all due respect, this story reminds me a lot of this one. That's not saying you copied or anything, just a mere coincidence.
However, this one wasn't very enjoyable compared to the other, so it was a bit of a letdown. Not that I should expect much from cartoon porn in the first place.
Anyway, despite you being a talented writer, this story didn't do much for me. Don't really feel the need to dislike it, though.
7533350 Ohhh that looks pretty good. I'm gonna have to save that for later, but I am curious about something. Why did you link to the actual chapter of the story instead of the story's page?
7533367 Sorry, I was doing it from my phone and copied the wrong url. My bad. No forced promoting intended.
7534077 Heh, no worries, man.
7530193 Oh hey, its Scratch. :P
This could go with a sequel, or just getting continued. Either works I suppose. Though for people like me (who keep a nice organized set of bookshelves, and one of which holds all of the completely read stuff) having a story go from "Complete" to "Incomplete" can be a nightmare. But as it won't be a first... I'll be happy to see it go either way.
I'm just wanting to see these two build more of their relationship. What was that phrase? Incest is rincest? I don't remember. Oh! Great story, I will look forward to reading more. :P
I know I have a problem when I find them cute now.
Absolutely adorable.