The Queen of the changelings has returned and now has a new plan to take over Equestria and it involves with the new power they have from their time; they can turn a pony into a changeling. The mane six Celestia are the first victims and Luna is relying on a few ponies and a human to take back their home and Queen Chrysalis is now on the move to find the rest of the ponies in Ponyville and he'll have a angel and a certain hedgehog to help him. WARNING: This is my First story so I might have a few Grammar problems
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THIS IS PRETTY GOOD SO FAR. THINK MY OC PRINCESS HEART OF THE CHANGLINGS CAN BE IN IT SINCE THERE ARE OCS & ALL? http://devious-discord-rp.deviantart.com/gallery/37124021
SHE'S THE KINDHEARTED TYPE WHO BELIEVE THAT LOVE SHOULD BE GIVEN TO THE CHANGLINGS WILLINGLY INSTEAD OF STOLEN IF THEY ARE TO SURVIVE. SINCE THAT WAY NO ONE GETS HURT. & SHE'S CHRYSALIS'S DAUGHTER.
Huh that is a good idea thanks this could get a good way for my story thanks I'll think about it
Dear GOD this story is heading for a disaster. Luckily it's cancelled. And a FEW grammar mistakes? Oh my god, that was every grammar nazi's nightmare! Hire an editor or something. Ponies should never cross with Kingdom Hearts AND Sonic. At least only one thing at a time. Pacing is way to fast, you don't even put exclamation points, and Princess Luna shouldn't have a son. Make it someone else, who's also old enough to actually pick up a sword.
WHY!? WHY DOES THIS EXIST? WHY!? WHY!? WWWHHHHHHHYYYY!?