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Beautiful man so good i love it
It's good so far are you going to cover her void abilities from war within?
Where dafuk have you been?????
7886102 i have a plan, making it work in Equestria is going to be something though. Since this takes place before the War Within.
7886120 work, school, house remodel, trying to find and organize all of my paper copies of this story.
7886206 Well we know she "should" have had the abilities all along but with her memories repressed she can't remember how. That was kinda the whole point of the war within, reclaiming lost memories. So with luna and all that should technically be simple. However you'd have to make a need to reclaim those memories in the first place which is would be the harder part honestly.
Also good to know i'm not the only who has to write their story down before typing it.
7886206 Jesus Christ I didn't know you had it on paper first
7886220 I want to do something similar, a vision quest or something in the mountains. Perhaps a nightmare/ vision could work. I intent to add a warframe from the picture, and making transference would heavily simplify what I originally planned.
7886224 wrote 5 chapters while in alaska last summer.
7886682 One, is she going to get her warframes back? Two, post next chapter already! I can't take the suspense!
7889387 no, the frame in the picture is there for comic releif.
So someone else taking a post second dream but pre war within Tenno.
Well, yours is published so I guess it's better...
I kinda like your style, though I believ you could use an editor, there tends to be spelling errors or missing words throughout.
Also, I don't see how this is a sequel to Planet Équin Incident since that one absolved itself of the Second Dream lore
8153647 I do have an editor. Its clear he missed a thing or two. It happens.
Silly Tenno, you can't die
T̜̝̦͕h͇͉̝̣͉͇̯e͈̙̰͓ ̵̳̤͕̬̖͖̺Ṃ̯̟̝a҉̪̳n͙̭͓͚̭͎ ̤̟͉̯̙̜i̴̮̺ń̦̠̳̺ ̛̩̥̪͔̳̲ṭh̜̞e͍͔͔̫̻̠ w̙a̷̮̘̠̭̪̗l҉͍͔͚l̼̭͙͚̟̟ͅ,̴̪͓̤̣͎͉ ͖̣w̤̤o̲̘̘͓̻͔n̦͙͖̼̣̘̺͡'͖͉̺͔͔͚͇t̨ ̢͖̱͚̖̹a͔̰̱̤̥͚l̼̮͈̞̫͢ͅl̯̳̤̥͓o̷͓w̴͓̗̖͔ ͚̤͘i̭͍t̰̰̺̬̬̀ :}
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Not necessarily wrong but it is generally accepted that 'Equis' is the name of the planet and 'Equish' or 'Equestrian' is the name of their language. (Although I may have spelled them wrong, since my usual avenue of looking up words don't work here)Edit: In chapter 5 you used the word 'Equestrian' so that would be the word to use here too.
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Damn. Two years early, and how right you are.