Awwwww

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7358690 I love romantic tales with Sunset, SO CUTE

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That's so sweet of you. I hope you like the rest of it

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7358708 Aw shucks, its no problem Sugarcube

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I'm legitimately blushing right now
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It's pretty cute so far. But 'Anon'? Really? You've written a halfway decent OC. Give the poor bastard a name.

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I wanted to give him a name, but I was struggling to pick a good guy name

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Thank you

"I can't leave you out here in the cold. I want you to come with me; I'll give you food, shelter and a place to stay."

And don't forget to feed her the eggs.

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That's the nice thing about FiM. Names help with characterization. What does he like? What are his interests? Even if you just want his character focused on Sunset, you could be clever there. Like what makes a sunset better? Like maybe a cloudy sky, evening mist, or a clear horizon. I'd probably steer clear from naming him Air Pollution, though, no matter how gorgeous of a sunset that makes.

Ugh, always with the aeon and present tense second person -_-

Sweet! Want more!

One thing that I never see and want to, is a fic where she and her boyfriend go back to Equestria together.

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I never planned on doing that

7361628 Well, in the case of this story it would be interesting to see the shift in control, having to have her show him how to be a pony.

Just a thought.