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Redwallfan2000


I'm a big fan of MLP: FIM and Brain Jacques's Redwall Series.

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Gotta say a pretty good story so far. As for the cooking element you could write over a few chapters how the captor gains their trust over a longer timeline and say for several months and then convinces them to take care of most of the cooking themselves

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Well they are going to be prey to him but thanks for liking the chapter so far!

Where is the final chapter, I really want know what happen next.

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