It has been many years since King Sombra overtook Equestria and enslaved most of its inhabitants and killed off others. All of Equestria is in ruin, and only a fraction of the ponies once around are alive anymore.
But there is hope... in a group of drastically different individuals. With Silent Storm, Blind Eye, Ecliptic Night, Bloodbound, and many others they meet along the way, will they stop King Sombra before it's truly too late?
(Chapter 2 is in the works!)
(Ratings are getting better! (ьºωº)ь)
Chapters (2)
When posting, please keep in mind that constructive criticism is okay, but flat-out hatred or disrespect is hurtful. (AKA don't be faygoDrive.)
Crude is fine if it holds some meaning and some sort of constructive criticism for me.
I for one liked it, and look forward to more.
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I'm just curious, what did you write before?
Or did it doublepost?
7305918 I accidentally said if instead of it, and my eye wouldn't stop twitching until I fixed it.
Also have you added this story to any groups that it would apply to? If you haven't you should, it'll make the story easier for people to find.
Thank you. Posted it.
7309223 find groups that apply like sombra stories or violent stories, dark, gore, it helps get the story out and helps make it easier for people to find
Ex: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/1960/villains-of-equestria post it on something like this
Chapter One is not complete yet, if you couldn't read the first two indicators.
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And you posted it because...?
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I already made a good chunk. If I wasn't going for extensive chapters like I am, I could've used that as a chapter. Plus I got to the perfect point to stop and take a bit of a break. (Wee bit of suspense.)
Also, writing huge chunks like that takes time.
I am certainly having a good time here! A very interesting and more importantly imagination-filled stories. I love this timeline
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Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!
Also, I'm lazy. Sorry for lack of completion on Ch1.
(BTW, *story)
7318222 it's OK xD
Once again I'm loving this story, and I can't wait for more.
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Oh, you.
Chapter 2 will be started next week on Friday.
I realize that people are downvoting... but why? Rather than just downvote, critique me, I don't really mind. I just don't like when people give no reason for disliking something or someone.
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Oh my, seems it's the night where soldiers die...
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"Someone's gon' die tonight."
-JonTron
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You forgot this...
7319988 yes me, your friendly neighborhood....random person