Carrot Cake knows how tough it is to raise a unicorn. Especially if you're not one yourself. Sometimes what a unicorn wants, she gets. Pumpkin Cake wants to give him a Father's Day that he will never forget. (No matter how hard he tries.)
"Well you're already winning since you're at least willing to try," he said. She frowned.
Seriously. This is some heavy fucking shit, right there. May be a clopfic, but it's clearly a short drama about a marriage well past the point of "serious trouble"... I mean, he's got a smoking-hot, willing mare on top of him, and he still finds enough bile inside him to let that one out... To say they have "issues" would be the understatement of the decade.
Yeah, the one guy that's going to go all Freud on the goddamn clopfic. ;]
Also... May be a bit of a touchy subject, possibly, but that line's not something you just imagine out of thin air...
- also,
"I don't know why Mom would want to do that all night and all day,"
Nice story so far, though there's something you may want to edit.
That should be "Pound's".
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Seriously. This is some heavy fucking shit, right there. May be a clopfic, but it's clearly a short drama about a marriage well past the point of "serious trouble"... I mean, he's got a smoking-hot, willing mare on top of him, and he still finds enough bile inside him to let that one out... To say they have "issues" would be the understatement of the decade.
Yeah, the one guy that's going to go all Freud on the goddamn clopfic. ;]
Also... May be a bit of a touchy subject, possibly, but that line's not something you just imagine out of thin air...
- also,
Shouldn't that be "wouldn't want to do that"?
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Fixed! Thank you.