elfien lied crossover this is the first one on this site

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Whoop~! Awesome! I feel special now!

-Inkheart

7310891 you are i can't wait for more but in the meantime i'll wait until it gets more chapters

7310896
Very well. I'll reply once I get a few. I already have Chapter 1 written up; some people are getting a special 'pre-read' however.

-Inkheart

7310901 its okay take your time i can wait

You should really put spaces in between paragraphs. It makes this so hard to read when everything looks like one big wall of text. other than that its great and i can't wait for more.

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It's really just her abilities and physical attributes that show-based. Watching the show might give you a better understanding of her Limbs, but I don't know if subjecting yourself to that kind of violence, just to better understand something that I feel is explained pretty well, is worth it. Wow, that was a long-ass sentence...

-Inkheart

7311322
Hm... Normally, I use a double-space in paragraphs to show a shift in character. I suppose I could edit that pretty easily.

-Inkheart

7311716 I'd suggest using a page break to signify a time jump or shift in character. Something to make sure people know that a change has happened

7311716 Yeah, I'm looking at the story now and its formatted completely different than it was when i read it last night... I think my laptop must have derped when it loaded the page or something. It looks great now.

Interesting start.

Okay that went in the complete opposite of what the title implied.