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Courage, a prince of Shadow Fall must go on a quest saves his father from a poison that was inflicted on to him from an mask assassins as he tried defended his Kingdom. The poison in question it's quite dangerous if not treated in time and only known cure is the blood rose which only grows in the everfree forest. Now courage and four of his allies must travel to the land of Equestria to find the blood Rose before times run out.

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Ah, crap I didn't get a few words capitalized. Oh well, I'll fix it later.

Ya might 'ave some more glarin' problems than a few forgotten capitals, bruv. Ya'd do well to give that synopsis a little skim over, lest an masked assassins gets you too. Ehehehehe!

Maybe that name will suit the main character more: Shadow
If you want, you can even also give him second name\title like "The Gorehowl" or "The Dark Fang". Example - Shadow the Gorehowl. I personally like Shadow the Gorehowl :)
Anyway its up to you to rename him or not, I just wanted help you a little with this little offer.

P.S. I like this story so far :)

7326156 that was the second name I was about to choose for him. couldn't decide ,courage or shadow.

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