Twilight Sparkle died one year ago throwing herself in front of a spell meant for Princess Luna. Today her friends gather on the anniversary of their friends sacrifice, but the service is interrupted by an ursa major and a mysterious figure.
Seams the bold setting got left on. I'd recommend fixing that it's rather confusing at first. but overall good read. Also futo princess molestia rides again!
7251412 there are, celestia is Twilight's father. You should have known that if you read the second chapter. The other is Luna I won't reveal others as that would be spoilers.
7252212 Vampire king, you lay upon the blood soaked dead of your ruined land castles plundered, dominions ruined, servants destroyed. All to end the hellfire with which you sought to cover the world. A bloody conquest having consumed hundreds of thousands, countless villages razed to the ground and over twenty thousand impaled and prostrated by you and you alone, to strike horror into the heart of mortal men! monster, demon, devil conceived from the bleakest womb, what say you now!? alucard "The aristocrats!" there's a hellsing abridged fic called I have vacation days!? (hilarious)
re read this story today to kill some time, I love how twilight now tease people, also my three biggest question are does cadence knew about Twilight and Shiny ? what happen to the wolf pup?? I do hope twilight still has it and it now some kind of monster of a beast that loyal to twilight... and is twilight a futa?
7252524 in all technicality that kind of thing has happened in other universes too. Like the justice league animated series when toyman blasted superman
7266650 between the time I wrote that comment and the second chapter I changed my mind. funny that, it's almost like ideas and stories can change while they are written, at the whim of the writer.
I really don't like how fast everyhting is going and how everyone seems the really fast romance is kind of bugging me but. And lastly i wish you just Luna and twighlight romance and not The Celestia romance. But I do like the rest
7271795 Nah just don't think it really fits. I think it just needlessly adds to the stuff happening in the story (Also don't like the idea of more then 1 love story going on when the story is about love story) Just feel like it should be about Twi and Luna. And the fact that Twi was in a war. Just my opinion though
Okay what a twist but to heck with it this is good! I hope to see more soon and even though it might not seem all that important now I would love to hear how Shinning and Cadence take the news lol
“Dearest 'Tia thou has always had an—” Luna snorted her blatant amusement before continuing to speak. “—open door policy!” Luna exclaimed between sisterly snickers “It seems thy vice hath become worse, since mine banishment and return!”
You have a broken bold tag near the beginning of the chapter.
You forgot close Tag
Seams the bold setting got left on. I'd recommend fixing that it's rather confusing at first. but overall good read. Also futo princess molestia rides again!
Typical Celestia not keeping her Dong in her draw
7251235 yeah i got confused after a certain point
wow just wow
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7251250 fixed the broken tag, I forgot the open square bracket on the end tag.
7251245 hehehehe
7206180 No futas? Then why is it in the Futaquestria group?
7251412 there are, celestia is Twilight's father. You should have known that if you read the second chapter.
The other is Luna I won't reveal others as that would be spoilers.
wow great chapter i loving it,
so twilight is date her aunt lol oh well.
love this chapter and story if i could like it mult time i would
Futacorns and Princest? It's like a hentai retelling of the English Astistocracy! ZING! (Sticking to this, can't wait for next time!)
Wait isn't this princest now? Their both princesses and related to each other.
Also i spotted some mistakes i will try to correct them.
7251765 indeed, after hearing about Celly's exploits, my first instinct was to quote the line and post "....The Aristocrats!"
7252212 Vampire king, you lay upon the blood soaked dead of your ruined land castles plundered, dominions ruined, servants destroyed. All to end the hellfire with which you sought to cover the world. A bloody conquest having consumed hundreds of thousands, countless villages razed to the ground and over twenty thousand impaled and prostrated by you and you alone, to strike horror into the heart of mortal men! monster, demon, devil conceived from the bleakest womb, what say you now!?
alucard "The aristocrats!" there's a hellsing abridged fic called I have vacation days!? (hilarious)
7252201 suggest or comment on them don't just change them.
re read this story today to kill some time, I love how twilight now tease people, also my three biggest question are
does cadence knew about Twilight and Shiny ?
what happen to the wolf pup?? I do hope twilight still has it and it now some kind of monster of a beast that loyal to twilight...
and is twilight a futa?
7252525 patients my friend all in good time.
7252524 sure more the merrier. just pm me you're gmail address and When I do the next chapter you'll be added.
7252524 in all technicality that kind of thing has happened in other universes too. Like the justice league animated series when toyman blasted superman
7252273 Roger that.
7206180 then why was this added to the futaquestria group?
7266650 between the time I wrote that comment and the second chapter I changed my mind. funny that, it's almost like ideas and stories can change while they are written, at the whim of the writer.
7266773 couldn't make it through the first chapter. It seemed like there was a bunch of missing punctuation, but I wasn't 100% sure.
7266788 well you'd have to take it up with my editor and proofreader as we went through that chapter ten times before I published it.
7252538 oh I knew I have to wait but I can still ask question,
my mind does come up with so many ideas on what could happen,
that single line made me laugh going to be put it in my second life profile as another great quote.
I really don't like how fast everyhting is going and how everyone seems the really fast romance is kind of bugging me but. And lastly i wish you just Luna and twighlight romance and not The Celestia romance. But I do like the rest
7271681 what's wrong with 'Tia having a romance, are you saying you want her to be alone?
7271795 Nah just don't think it really fits. I think it just needlessly adds to the stuff happening in the story (Also don't like the idea of more then 1 love story going on when the story is about love story) Just feel like it should be about Twi and Luna. And the fact that Twi was in a war. Just my opinion though
Okay what a twist but to heck with it this is good! I hope to see more soon and even though it might not seem all that important now I would love to hear how Shinning and Cadence take the news lol
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Ego Crepusculum, dea, de magia, scientia, libidinem, et bellum. Jurare in mea magia, quod amo Principem Luna.
Am I a nerd for instantly understanding this? It's latin... I have been thought latin... Celestia help me... I am a nerd...
9445502 lol
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I understood it! Not quite instantly, but right quick.
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Well of course you did. You're a centurion, of course you can read Latin and Greek.