Read this over on deviantart a while back and I'm glad to see it here! Some really freaky stuff happens to these ponies and I was glad that they all managed to pull through. I'll be sure to read it again as you post it and perhaps give my commentary as you go.

Till then!

So will you continue to post the newest chapters to your Deviant Art as you finish them, or will you post the last ones here as you get to them?

>>758739758739

They'll be posted on deviantart first. Then be posted here.

Okay, awesome. Go Fluttershy. Also, you can make it a clickable link by [ url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GqJMx6kYyU&list=PLABD0AEFCD46D56DA&feature=plcp]doing this[/url]. Just remove the first space and replace 'this' with something more appropriate.

And now I can read/review these all properly!

I read several episodes on DA.  Glad to see it's on here now!  Absolutely love it.  Can't wait to make my reviews & comments

The actual series from deviantart? Nice. Followed.

So you're gonna post the rest of it here, too? I didn't read very much more of it because I had a difficult time on DA following the order of the stories.

You mean this is finally on FimFiction?

I don't have to go digging through disorganized story posts to follow the plot?

I don't have to stare at DeviantArt's ugly design to enjoy this?

ALL OF MY YES!

okay 1st, Nice cover art

2nd, Story is good

3rd... Who am I kidding LOVE IT!

One of my favorite stories ever. I'm glad to see it here in fimfiction

Waiting for pearl necklace

PS:you could use the hiperlink option for the music in the "edit story" option

>>758728758728

The series isn't over yet. But I promised I'd start posting it over here on Fim when I got to a certain point, which I now have.

This little chapter was the only thing I've ever read of the POV Series, and it's my favorite so far. What makes this part so saddening, is that it could be right! We didn't have seen Rainbow Dash during the Return of Harmony opening, so it seems that this could be true.

Ah, I loved this series. Too bad the other ones aren't anywhere near as good.

And one by one they start to fight back against Discord's corruption.

They are NOT his toys.

Excuse me, I have a statue to chuck into a black hole. Also, damn. You wonder what happened elsewhere beyond Ponyville. And Scoots doesn't have a family? Sad...

Sniff.

Poor Diamond.

>>763009763009

She has a family NOW.

>>765713765713

Things aren't done getting worse for her yet.

Who is this filly that starts with a C?

>>768935768935

A tribute to this fic. http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-cupcakes-day-out.html

This is easily one of my favourite chapters. I really liked the idea of the wisdom gained not only from seeing new things about her world but also several other worlds. To see how her life could have been if she stayed in the city. All of this did truly expand her horizon.

And the farmer really shows an incredible willpower.

Woah. That's all I have to say. Applejack is one brave mammajamma.

That was intense. Also seemed a little weird that the title to this one was formatted so differently.

Poor kid... Poor Rarity, too.

I remember this from DA. For the record... no. Mayor Mare has little/no talent in governing and a pretty rock could do better than her.

Good on AJ, there. Ah, different paths. Like Octavia being Pinkie's sister, there. :D And yeah, get Trixie the help she needs! Then make Rarity give her the money to get a new curtain to replace the one she stole/vandalized!

The Fucking Gate of Truth... I loved this chapter

I want MOAR

This is heavy stuff. And it's nothing compared to what Applejack just went through. I really admire that mare.

Man, is Discord a bastard. It's all fun and games for him and no consideration for anyone else. I love his character but this really sets my guns to aiming for his stupid face.

Eagerly awaiting more!

>>774181774181

That's a left over from when these stories were being done as stand alone tales.

>>775620775620

Happy to know she comes across as the most effective kind of hero here.

>>775091775091

You wanna break her heart?

And Trixie LET HER use the curtain. It was part of the show as far as Trixie was concerned.

>>779316779316 As for as the Mayor's concerned, yeah. And for the curtain, still vandalism. Good story potential, though...

Intense man... Intense.

So let me get this straight

Pinkie-

Pinkamena-

Angry Pinkie-

Suprise -

Pinky and Diane-

Did i get those right?

I love you Pinkie Pie. I want to hug you so bad.

*Slow claps, turning into thunderous applause*

Pinkie Pie is my least-favorite of the Mane Six. I still like her... but she can be grating. Excellent analysis of her and breaking her down, pun intended.

and my favorite chapter, coming up! Go, Twilight! Save Trixie!

This was one of the best chapters

>>779544779544

Well, Diane has straight hair but she and Pinky contains Pinkie Pie's positive feelings about her family and home which she had COMPLETELY buried.

But yeah, Pinkie Pie was a split up mess.

>>780224780224 *she hugs you*

>>781709781709

Well I hope the rest of the series doesn't feel like filler.

>>781092781092

In a way, the saving of Trixie is where I intended to originally end the series (for a third time) but I wanted to have a short fight with Discord at the end for action's sake. But . . . so many chances for character development present themselves.

D'aww. This is good, but I feel so bad for Trixie...

Wow, I wanted to kick Spike HARD there. Good use of the Trixie background clones, there, for her family. And Spike, Dash is about a hundred times worse than Trixie, for the record, k?

To steal from TV Tropes: This is Break The Haughty turned Up To Eleven.

And it's finally up here on FIMfiction! Yay!

I'm so looking forward to seeing the rest of it get posted here, it's quite possibly the very best MLP:FiM fanfic ever done.

>>786827786827 "Wow, I wanted to kick Spike HARD there. "

You are my new best friend.

>>786827786827

Damn. I really did overdo Spike's attitude here.

>>788484788484

Dude you're exaggerating.

What exactly makes it the 'best ever done?'

That was a really cute spin on Scootaloo's backstory, though it still followed the common cliche. These just keep getting longer, and I find myself skipping over parts of them, but they are good.

>>791822791822

They keep getting longer because I'm putting more thought into them.

>>791822791822

It was meant to address reconstruct the idea into something that took into account the commonly asked questions.

I wish the show's Pinkie had a soul, like yours does.

>>792425792425

That's a interesting way to put it. :-)

I'm loving this more and more as it goes on. . .

>>795292795292

Thanks dude!

Nice to see this story here on Fimfiction.

Woah, Diamond Tiarra went a litttle overboard...

Another great chapter... but IIRC, in Mare-Do-Well, no, Applejack, you did not talk to Dash at all before your little scheme.

Okay, did the Diamond Tiara thing actually happen in canon for the fic? Always was confused about that.

And this, my favorite chapter. I loved Twilight sticking up for Trixie there against the illusion in the sanitarium there. So. true. Very... well-described, there, the entire chapter.

>>798751798751

Applejack, "Ah didn't see inta truth in the timeline yer talkin' about it."

>>798409798409

You ain't seen nothing yet!

Trixie's sisters reminded me of that group of Frieza'a henchmen in Dragon Ball Z with the way they did that group pose.  I am curious as to why Discord chose to play his mind games on Trixie.

Lol ok I loved the "maelstrom" and "sunny day" reference now I think I'll go and watch

Maelstrom Shippudom and imagine "sunny day" as a pony lol. But what would her cutiemark be and is Pinkie stealing characters from other shows and ponifing them lol.

>>802389802389

Read on why he did in Season Zero. (Already posted)

Ha! Good chapter! I wonder if anyone else caught where that emails reference came from?

Damn, he wiped out ALL the sea and Flutter ponies? That is... rather depressing for me. Especially since I now own all of MLP G1 on DVD. Sorry, just me, you know?

Anyway, good on Luna there. Great plan by her and cool under pressure thinking. But I noticed a few spots where... it's odd?

Great if you want to send a letter, but not much else, I'm afraid. Oh, and don't even bother trying to sic your new Bearers of those Elements on me&#133;" <-The end, there.

Somehow I could imagine them glaring at me&#133; a glare all the creepier by the strange genetic defect that left Sunny Place with white colored pupils, even if she could see perfectly fine...

DISCORD!

That's the only reason that comes to mind as to why Diamond Tiara would do that.

As for the rest of the story...I loved it.

HARRY POTTER REFERENCE FOR THE WIN!

Whatever happened to the Rarity who was stabbed by Diamond Tiarra?

>>803612803612

Hmmmm?

>>804727804727

Right on the money. And this is just the beginning!

>>804179804179

Guess that HTML doesn't translate here.

"Damn, he wiped out ALL the sea and Flutter ponies? That is... rather depressing for me. Especially since I now own all of MLP G1 on DVD.  Sorry, just me, you know?"

ALL of the previous MLP cartoons get their day on the spot light in this epically long series!

"Anyway, good on Luna there. Great plan by her and cool under pressure thinking. "

Even she isn't sure why she chose to let go of this chance at glory.

So Celestia has the sharingan. Interesting....

How did I know we weren't going to see Diamond Tiara again until POV season II?

I have a feeling there was a reason why Twilight brung up to Trixie about having to step up should something happen something happen to her.

This series gets five ponies:

I look forward to the next one.

Always great. Even if leaning on the fourth wall breaks a little hard.

>>809524809524

Where'd you get that idea?

>>811206811206 Her name has Amaterasu in it.

A wonderful hopeful ending for the first season.

A new evil will rise soon but the heroes are getting stronger. They will never give up.

God, I wanted to punch Luna for that letter...

Also, Dash? You started it. Three little words. Try to remember that, k? ;)

Great chapter, again. I'm out of superlatives methinks.

Oh s**t. That was so very, VERY close.

>>818722818722

Which part?

Technical question. You have a ton of followers on this story. Do you want to call this season finished, since you've started uploading a new season?

I...I don't know what to say.

>>846589846589

About what?

>>834017834017

Yes.

>>Alex Warlorn

If that's the case, why does the story say that it's still incomplete?

Pinkie sure has a lot of fractures in her mind. For a pony that's been fairly straight forward in the show, you came up with quite a few interesting personalities for her to work through. What's nice is that she was able to work it all out by herself. She just needed a good nights sleep! Or three!

Love all those fic references! I've read all of them

I'm with the other commenters here. Spike here is a complete dick. I think you may have gone overboard on him.

But I do like how you expanded on all the background Trixie's and had them be her identical sisters. It was cute, and, knowing what's coming up, critical to her current condition.

And Twilight really needs to stop thinking the worst of her friends. You'd think she'd know that by now.

Moving on!

>>847794847794

HEH. :-D

Another pony out of Discord's hold. That guy really had some reach, even after being defeated.

Proud of Rainbow here and how she finally mared up and got it out of her system. Literally. It's nice to see that even though these characters represent the elements they hold, they aren't tied to them. It's not like having alignments in D&D, thank Celestia.

Ever onward!

>>853693853693

Hey. That's a stereotype actually. It says flat out in nearly every edition of the game that two different characters with the same alignment are NOT going to act identically, the alignment is meant more as an indicator.  . . . Like cutie marks. They SHOW what their talent is, they don't DECIDE it.

Psst: you only need upo to the "v=stuff" untill that first ampersand- capitalization included; it's the code for the video; the rest is parsing for related videos and  channels/playlists.

ie; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GqJMx6kYyU

>>779334779334 I politely request that you read this it should show how good the mayor is at her job or failing that how bad everypony else is at being the mayor.

>>857992857992

I also read that story. I loved that story.

One of the more powerful interpretations of Trixie's deconstruction and rebuilding of her character that I've seen. Lots of $YMB0LY$1M and general unpleasantness.

Still, having Trixie reborn like this always makes me feel a little sad that I won't be seeing the Great and Powerful act anymore. That's the character I like so seeing the new Trixie feels like a betrayal. It's weird.

Anyway, I still enjoyed this and will continue on!

>>857992857992 Yeah, that doesn't dispute her canon incompetence, though.

>>814853814853 No that just means that she is really a big white and red wolf who is mute and likes to paint.

This fanfic is one of the best because it is well written, the characters are well defined and it somehow fits within the show overall. I also love the heartwarming moments from each of the cast in this, well no other way to put it, epic.

>>889121889121

Things have ONLY just begun! Check out the other seasons when done here! And I'm uploading them about one a day from the massive amount I already have on deivantart!

>Story of the Blanks reference

I'm not sure whether I should punch you in the face or kiss you - so I'll do both!

Also, Discord is (was?) my favorite character. This definitely makes me want to change that... HOLY CELESTIA THIS STORY IS AWESOME.

Now to keep reading.

Discord seems to have made a Nightmare-style trap there. Somehow...

>>10674931067493

Which chapter do you speak of?