• Member Since 16th Jun, 2012
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SoarinLove1234


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After a one night stand with Soarin, Rainbow Dash tries to tell her friends about what she thinks is the beginning of a relationship between her and the Wonderbolt Stallion. Each of her friends feels that she's getting ahead of herself and that she's done something horrible because they all know that Soarin and Spitfire(the lead mare of the Wonderbolts) have had an on-off again relationship, but Rainbow Dash only wants them to be happy for her.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 31 )

try using spaces. it being one jumbled mess doesn't make it good.

I am tracking this cause I have to know how this ends.

I'm not sure what your talking about, My story looks perfectly fine when I submit it and is not all jumbled up O.O I'm sorry if it appears that way to you.

This is getting intresting.:rainbowderp:

761627 Is that meant to be an insult? I'm not sure but that picture you posted with your comment seems to be an insult and I'm sorry if you don't like my story, but you don't need to be rude. If its not an insult then please just ignore this comment.

761627 Is that meant to be an insult? I'm not sure but that picture you posted with your comment seems to be an insult and I'm sorry if you don't like my story, but you don't need to be rude. If its not an insult then please just ignore this comment.774024 I imagine it happens in the real world more often than you might think unfortunately.

There's alot going on, it's alot to try to take in at once but it's slowly setting into my mind. I really hope you continue this. It's really a great story and i can't wait to see where you decide to take it. I can't wrap my finger around SoarinDash or SoarinFire, I know whatever you decide will end up being great and that you won't leave anything to disappointment.

I honestly can't believe there are no comments on this or very many views. Think about posting a fanart pic to help draw people in? In all else though, VERY nice job.:rainbowdetermined2:

801075 I'm glad you like it :) I'm fairly new to this site so how would I post a fan pic for my story?:derpyderp2: I've looked and don't see how to do that :derpytongue2:and I do intend to finish this story, it just takes me a few days inbetween each chapter to plot and such as this is a sort of spur of the moment story that I came up with when I found this site, so its developing as I write it lol.

There should be an area where you type the description and added tags that should allow you to upload a picture or use a link.

As for writing, take your time. Myself and others have no problem waiting a little longer for you to have time to plan the story out.

Much appreciation to you though!:twilightsmile:

I like a good conflict. ^^ I'm glad you portrayed Spitfire as not a total witch. It makes me want to hate her if she tries to take Soarin away from Rainbow Dash. I can't wait to read more!

YAY I AM THE FIRST TO COMMENT!:yay::yay::pinkiehappy:

Hello everybody! May I just say what a cliffhanger this is right now? So disappointing so please write more soon and oh sweet celestia use paragraphs when you switch subjects! And also a quick question-how do you attach a photo to your profile cause I want to put one in. :rainbowhuh::raritydespair:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 1 mustache equals 1 star equals 1 rating of "I like this now"

I'm totally going to die from waiting for the next chapter. Wait, HNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG HEART ATTACK!!!

I'm wondering what's going to happen if rainbow is pregnant.

fluttershy and big macitosh are marraied. aw guess this mean there is no macxcherrilee

at least im the second :duck:

you should make Dash pregnant! That would be halirious if she storms in when the weddings going on and throws the papers at soarin, spitfire picks then up before soarin gets to them, then she has an outburst on soarin and she appologizes to dash:rainbowlaugh: succsess!

get over it dash 1-night stand ring a bell meres hint hint:trollestia:but realy dash no lesbo

Comment posted by flame5768 deleted Mar 17th, 2013

Sorry, but as you can guess by my name, I hate the SoarinDash ship. Anyways, its got an interesting storyline, but I'm afraid I'm not going to be reading the rest once you make it, because either way it'll end, I'm not going to end up liking it. Good work up untill this point, and please don't think I am hating, this is one of the few soarindash fics I actually enjoyed.

A story this good needs to have a lot more chapters can you make more please...please...please if you do just reply back hope you make more chapters:raritystarry::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::flutterrage:

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