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Having each of the characters right journals to explain there perspective is quite novel to me. In most stories the author simply changed perspective from one character to another. There's nothing wrong with that method but this is a nice deviation from the norm. Keep up the distinct and impressive work.
I can't wait for the scene where the princesses introduce David to the Mane 6, and Rarity royally freaks over her work.
Rarity: "Celestia's teats! Who's the pony that did that atrocious repair job!?"
Luna: ""
This chapter felt much more organic. I shall continue tomorrow. For tonight, sleep calls.
POV changes, too? You're spoiling me, good sir.
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