[Second Person] You're lost in the great world of Equestria, you don't know anyone who might help you until you ran across the almighty Rainbow Dash. sexyness ensues
This piece is in desperate, desperate need of an editor and a proof reader.
There are words missing in too many sentences and paragraphs to list that makes it hard to read and to follow. The spelling is fine but the grammar needs work.
that's a weird way to meet your love interest
This piece is in desperate, desperate need of an editor and a proof reader.
There are words missing in too many sentences and paragraphs to list that makes it hard to read and to follow. The spelling is fine but the grammar needs work.
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I'll make sure to find an editor and proofreader to make this story all more good.
Yesss keep it up dude this is mint
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Ilove this so can't wait to see where this goes.