Spitfire was slowly making her way back to her room from the boss' office, thinking about Ducky. The human meant so much to her... she almost couldn't believe it. Even when she was turned-down by Ducky about a month ago, her feelings have only gotten stronger for him. She pondered every posable reason as to why her love was so strong for him. She loved Ducky because he was the only being that could touch her heart. Almost everypony always saw her as either a strict captain, a money bag, or a dirty slut. The Wonderbolts were good friends, but only one person took time out of his day to make sure she was happy, who comforted her when she was sad and warmed her heart when she needed it most... Ducky.
An innocent smile formed on Spitfires snout as she dreamed about Ducky. As she neared her room, she started to hear loud noises coming from the rookies room.
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"Ow!!! You Bitch!"
*CRACK*
"AAAA!! What is wrong with you!"
*WHAP.... CRASH!!!*
"STOP IT!"
She didn't let up, the rookie continued to fly around the room, attacking from all angles to cause maximum damage to your soft human body. You tried to make a run for it, but you were immediately tackled and pined to the ground face-first. The door swung open.
"What the hell is going on here!" It was Spitfire.
You try to look up but you are still pined to the floor, "It's not what you think captain-"
"Not what I think!? Your siting on top of Ducky with spots of his blood on your coat and your telling me that 'it's not what I think'?" The room was silent. You felt Rainbow Dash step off of you and take a few steps back. You still decide to lay down and take a moment to catch your breath. "Are you alright Ducky?" Spitfire's tone drastically changed from seething anger, to concern for you.
You mumble into the soft white carpet, "I'm fine."
Spitfire sighs in relief and returns to the Rookie, "I just don't understand you Rainbow." You then feel Spitfire's moist nose nudge into your side, "Come on Ducky, lets go."
You sorely stand up, making loud groaning noises as you did. When you finally got up, you looked at the orange pegasus. She had a deeply concerned look in her face as she stared at you. She then took a few steps to get to your side and started to lead you out of the room. Before the door closes shut behind you, you gaze back at Rainbow Dash, who was sadly looking at the white floor below her. You couldn't tell, but it seemed like she was crying.
Spitfire used her body to help steer you back to her room. When you finally reached her room, you sat down on the white couch and looked at Spitfire. She walked into the bathroom, which was out of sight, and turned on the bathroom sink. You couldn't tell what she was doing, but she soon came back a few seconds later with a wet washcloth in her mouth. She sat down next to you and placed the wash cloth in her hoof.
"Looks like it hurt..." Spitfire said sarcastically. You weren't in a joking mood. She then began to dab the wounds on your face gently with the washcloth. You groaned as she began to dab the cuts on your cheeks. You shrugged off the pain and began to stare deeply into the mare's eyes as she continued to soak up the blood on your face.
You couldn't tell if it was because of a concussion, but something about Spitfire at this moment made you think about kissing her right then and there, But something was holding you back. Spitfire took the bloodied wash cloth and set it on a near by table.
She looked back at you and said, "Feel better?"
"A little," you respond.
You felt a strange feeling come over you, something you had never felt before. Something about Spitfire changed in this moment to you. A new feeling began to overtake your heart, something you had never felt before... it was love.
"You alright Ducky? You seem a little disoriented."
"Huh... what?" You shake your head to snap out of the trance you were in. The feeling in your heart started to settle down, but it was still lingering. "Oh, nothing Spitfire."
"Are you sure, Looks like you had something important to say."
A part of you just wanted to take her and make love to her on the spot, but another part seemed to keep whispering, "Not now you dummy, wait for the perfect moment."
"No really it was nothing," You responded.
"Alright, well I need to get some sleep, and don't worry about Rainbow Dash... I have it covered." She then jumped off of the couch and made her way to her bed.
You crawled under the sheets and slowly started to close you eyes. Spitfire then turned off the lights
"Goodnight Spitfire," you said
"Goodnight Ducky," Spitfire then mumbled something inaudible to herself, and she soon fell into a deep slumber.
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Spitfire's Room
8:17 A.M.
19 days until show in Las Pegasus.
You yawn and slowly awake from your slumber. As you slowly sit-up, you groan about the weak, but still lingering pain from last nights beat down. Trying to ignore the pain, you make your way to the bathroom. As you walk in, you notice a folded note next to your tooth brush. You pick up the note and read it;
Ducky,
Feel free to use my shower in the morning. Judging from the spots of blood on your shirt, it looks like you could use one. Use any of the soaps that are already in there, I already got you a towel you can use to dry yourself off. I have practice at 6:30 with the rest of the team, and we will be done around 9:45. Don't forget about the horror movie tonight, this month's movie is supposed to be very scary and I can't wait to hear Soarin' scream like a little filly again. See you there!
Spitfire
You chuckle silently and set the note back on the counter. You take a quick glance in the mirror above and notice a cut under your left eye along with a bruise on your right cheek... but other than that you looked fine. You decide that a shower would do you some good, so you quickly undress and step in. Spitfire was only 4'6" but her shower was bigger than most normal ones in Equestria were, so thankfully, you didn't have to crouch over to clean yourself. You let the water run over your bruised body as you grab a bottle of shampoo labeled; S'mores.
You open the bottle and squeeze a small amount in the palm of your hand. As you rub the sweet smelling contents in your hair, your mind drifts off.... thinking about how you will spend your first day on vacation. a few ideas came to mind, but you decided that you should first grab some breakfast with the rest of the team.
The shower was over as quickly as it had started. You wash out the remaining soap in your hair and turn the water off. You then quickly dry yourself off and make your way to the wardrobe that Spitfire lent you for your clothes. You put on a pair of blue and yellow shorts, along with a basic white t-shirt. As you leave Spitfire's room to start the day, you slip on a pair of sandals and pull your goggles around your neck... I wonder whats for breakfast
Awesome new chapter
There is a god
Good chapter! So...how bout' this weather?
Zombie story, back from the dead.
Congrats on the scholarship.
So... Spitfire's around 4'6"?
Seems about right. maybe a couple inches taller than normal
I'm so glad the next chapter is out. We love you, Stasys.
827383 A League of Their Own?
This is not the end of the chapter, and I'm sorry if there is alot of gramer mistakes, its just that I felt I needed to get this out to let you guys know that I haven't died or anything.
Here's a fun game, spot the error made!
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OCD powers, activate.
This is a pretty smashing read. A story can easily be destroyed by grammar and spelling mistakes, but I feel that yours is better than that.
Do continue.
Hey man take your time, college comes first! And as i always say, take your time i'd rather see quality work over quanity!
It's okay on the late chapter
But ever since the first chapter, ive liked this story, do continue.
my editor/proofreader senses punched me in th' gut while reading this. good though.
I enjoy the story, but the grammar errors kind of bother me. If you want me to, I could proof-read for mistakes.
1372216 Wow, you got more than I could account for mate.
Here is a gift for thou!
you only have so many followers because there are very few human x spitfire shipfics on this site (I assume) also your story is pretty good so far. but in all seriousness I only know of one other human x spitfire shipfic on this site.
1374921 well I know of a couple. It's just that I have a "condition," that when I do something that I think sucks , I believe the world thinks it sucks. When I first started this story I thought everyone was going to hate it and I would probably only have literally 3 followers. So it surprises me that I've 300+ people have favorited the story and that I have over a hundred people following me. To make maters worse, I was gone for literally a month and since then I've become even more popular. This literally all is unreal to me that so many people enjoy my stories
Well, that was sudden, I was it would take him a little longer to realise his feelings for her.
1375869 I have to agree with PostalPone. This story has been great but that section was really out of nowhere and felt out of place. In the previous chapters the author writes that Ducky knows about Spitfires feelings but doesn't want to get too serious yet. Now this would be okay if there was a build up but this feels almost forced.
1375038 like I said the theme to your story is rare.
time is somthing i do not have
1375869 I understand and I know that it is too soon. It was just a simple knock to the head that gave Ducky a different perspective on things. I am not a fan of quick relationships but that part was just a moment where Ducky starts to understand his feelings for spitfire. They aren't developed yet and in about two chapters you'll find out the one MAJOR reason why Ducky hasn't made a move on Spitfire. You also need to remember that Ducky has been with Spitfire for over two months. Trust me when I say I know that it was a little fast, but the relationship will soon take a turn later in the story.
Ive got two huge questions. 1) ok, so i know ducky is a human.....but.....he's in a human body right? or is he a human in a pony's body?
2) why'd dash beat the hell out of ducky? seriously.... was she trying to injure him, so spitfire would be forced to care for him, and it would bring them closer? or.... was it all in good fun, but dash forgot humans are 5x weaker than ponies, and got a little overboard? or... does dash secretly want ducky to go die or something?
Also, why's the boss such a bitch? I can't help but imagine the female boss that peter griffin from "family guy" had when he worked at the brewery, i imagine her voice whenever i read the parts that the boss in this story is saying
Oh man that line made me laugh and seems a bit to far if you ask me but on that note s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/photos/images/newsfeed/000/132/573/15968-animated-artist-mihaaaa-clapping-clopplauding-gif-Octavia-reaction_image-reaction_ponies.gif?1307741462 Good story
So glad this is back! And congrats on the scholarship.
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Yes, Ducky is human and if you remember from the last chapter, Dash started a wrestling when he was supposed to be giving her a massage (and I wouldn't put it past Dash to take things to far).
Yes! Finally a new chapter! Praise the Lawd!
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The answer to your three questions are,
1. It is a human in a human body you need to remember that Ducky has no recollection of his past
2. Dash beat up Ducky for two reasons one, we all know that she can be very aggressive and competitive. An there is a second major reason why she is was so aggressive at that moment that will be explained later.
3. When aren't multi-millionaire corporate bosses bitchy. You also need to understand that even though the boss won't admit it, she slightly cares about the team... Mostly for business reasons though
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Your reply to my questions, namely answer number 2....it makes me want moar. Now I cant wait for a chapter update to see why dash was being extra aggressive.
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good to have you back Stasys, this is an amazing story
MOARand love the story keep up the good work
More please. And if that didnt catch your attenton heres this
MOAR NOW MUTHAFUCKAH -cough-
12 years don't mean crap against rainbow I guess.
I wish I could write good stories like these ;_; I've been waiting forever for another chapter this is one my fav stories :D keep it up!
Don't mean to be obsessive but this story feels like it was forgotten through time...
Seems a bit.... rushed.
still pretty good though.
Well it is 9 weeks since this chapter was putted here. Any update please or some information about it?
i don't really know what to say other then that it was awesome, im not good at writing comments sorry
1372902 fucking epic that first video was
It's been weeks and I haven't had a chapter...
Will die without sustenance...
really good story, would love an update! ^ ^
MORRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE PLEASE PLEASE I EFFING LOVE THIS STORY. U ARE AWESOME
Really good story, but I feel like the relationship is being rushed just a bit. I mean one minute he feels nothing for Spitfire, and then he's thinking about he perfect time to make love to her? It just doesn't flow well in my opinion. Not hating just giving a bit of constructive criticism.
Seems like Rainbow is a bit lonely.
....Hmmm.....
Pinkie Pie!! Prep the care packages!
I'm waaaay ahead of you Nate.
Hmm. We're going to need a bigger balloon....
Daaaaamn Dashie, someone's got issues~ :D
eheheh, awesome.
Seems a tad rushed, but I like it.
Nice
Good to hear that you got a scholarship in Charles Sturt University. It is also reassuring to find content creators living in Australia.