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ForgottenDreams


I bid you welcome traveler let this ancient storyteller do what he does best. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcsS60n04i48UCZJ0lYPGsQ

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How depressing... Spike's role in the show truly is just help the Mane Six and chase after Rarity or help Twilight, so it doesn't surprise me that this is what happens when regular life catches up... Poor Spike. May he find bliss and comfort in the next life. :pinkiesad2:

T^T Bye spike. You're the best.

Paragraphs are your friends. Invite them into your life.

'nuff said.

6999423 That is just adorable but why are Spike's eyes so close together? Shouldn't he at least be looking down at the baby?

6999413 you've never written a suicide letter before have you? You no longer care about rules or etiquette. All you care about is telling some one about your struggles. I know it is hard to follow such a long paragraph like this. However this is what most suicide letters are like. I know I've both written and read these types of letters in the past. So this is how I decided to have Spike write his letter.

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That's as may be, but if I see a wall of text, my vision dims and I take my interest elsewhere.

You'll find more than a few here hold that same belief. Give us a few spaces, huh?

6999579 you're not the only one. Just thought I would explain why I decided to do it like that.:twilightsmile:
I usually do my best to follow the writer's etiquette. Just not this time.

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:twilightoops: Spike! how could you????
:duck: he did have a little help Twilight.
:moustache: wut she said,,,,,
yeah didn't think of that darn it.......where he was looking...... good idea......

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:facehoof: Spike! again????
:duck: they don't call me the Element of Generosity for nothing:twilightoops:

6999737 My awe meter just broke:raritycry:

6999797 Ok now you're just trying to kill me with cuteness:raritydespair: and it's working:raritycry: and eventually the meter will get fixed:duck:

6999579 Ok I went back and spaced it out a little. Even though most notes that I have read in the past usually don't space out. I'd prefer people to get enraptured by a good story then to be intimidated by a long paragraph. Sorry for that I'll try not to do that in the future.

Oh Wow!:pinkiegasp: 300 views this calls for something special. THIS IS SPARTA!:flutterrage:

Wow reading too many suicidal fanfics is making me really depressed.
But who cares thats fine.
If you're reading this. Please let there be an aftermath/sequel. If not then that's fine.
I liked this fanfic

7022491 I'll think about it:twilightsmile: but it'll be awhile have a lot of other stories to write first like geez wiz:rainbowwild:

7023436 Oof this is a first for seeing spike but ya know it’s pretty spot on how we can take spike in the future how he shall be and all. Damn sad but oddly peaceful. I wouldn’t mind seeing an aftermath to this see how Twilight reacts once she realizes what has happened that’s if she ever dose due to how that letter is written it’s like he doesn’t even exist anymore. Anyways I would like to see an aftermath to this maybe even see how the rest of mane 6 respond. But until then if ever this was a oddly peaceful story so thanks for a good read.

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