There are plenty of girls that I would have been happy to wake up next to after a bender, but not this one. Now I'm lost and alone, and I think I'm going nuts. I only know one thing, I've got to get back,and I don't care who or what gets in my way.
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Whether you suck at clop or not, this story is still awesome.
dont care, story's too awesome
If you didn't include the explicit detail of Twilight's... alone time, you could probably pas this off as 'teen'.
2984732 Too much swearing, too much violence, too much blood, too much sexual themes. I wouldn't want my teenager reading this. I compare it to Empire or The Reapers Are The Angels, the sex scenes aren't real saucy, but they're there, and they're significant.
Ah crap... i finished the last chapter, now comes the worst part of all unfinished stories.... here's to frequent updates.
I'm having a real blast reading it so far, the humor is low brow enough not to require Celestia knows what sort of obscure knowledge and the story is getting more and more interesting with each chapter.
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Dafuq Pinkie...
2985395 Sometimes I screw up the spacing, and I'm too lazy to fix it. Sometimes I go back and fix stuff, but until I do that, I just hope my point gets across.
I came to this story not knowing what to expect, I have to say that it's pretty good. Awaiting the next chapter.
-Mis
Not for self. Don't start reading and drink something. I almost choked on my drink when he started whininh about his "pee-pee"
Edit: Nailed it. Well, nice chapter. Wait for more, as always. About clop hm....if you feel uncomfortable writing it, don't do it. What you showed as far it's not bad. I've seen lately some purely clop story, featured, checked it out and....geez, weak as hell. Those bits and pieces you have showed in your story are already better than some whole sex scenes I've seen.
2986064 I'm totally comfortable writing it, I just suck compared to others. I compare it to Empire or The Reapers Are The Angels, the sex scenes aren't real saucy, but they're there, and they're significant.
Heheheh. suck.
2987420 Yup, and I totally tolerate the way they are. This is not Xenophilia were sex scene have something around 6k words or something around it (but that story is strongly clop.... even if that particular story can work with no clop at all, in it's case it was only a cherry on the top), so this can stay the way it is.
Well, back to sleep *thud*
I am liking this story and DAMMIT! 2:34 Monday morning and I have school in a few hours BY CELESTIA'S HOT RUMP() I CURSE YOU!
when his internal orgins started reacting to twilights love fest I just died right then and there *here lies JCwonder he laughed so hard he died the end*
I laughed during the whole read. Great job. One nit pick, I think Jonh said he got hit by two 9MM in earlier chapters, then well the deagel appered. Also 2 .50 hollow points would almost decapitate the victim I believe. Bah storie to funny to give a fuck, thanks for the great read and hope for future chapters to come.
Is this guy part russian?!?
For reasons i cannot fathom, despite the fact i favorited this, and it normally does so for this story, I never got an email notice that this updated and the unread chapter counter for my favorites list didn't register that this chapter was unread and I only found out about this update when i was going through my entire favorites list looking for the stories that were truly legendary that he hadn't read yet
3019634 Yeah, Aru had the same problem. Try unfaving and then faving again.
Jeez,They really dont know what Prophecy sounds like do they?