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Rushing Biohazard


Sarcasm Ahoy!

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good story so far =)

876475 Yeah I don't like how the first chapter came out either so I'll mess with it a bit in the future, anything else you could give me would be appreciated I'm kinda new to this.

Lol at the end :rainbowhuh:

The best freakin chapter yet

1189863Eh, I decided against burning any pups. Although I'll leave it up to you to decide who was trapped in the mines to choke on smoke.

Ja ich lieben das blut!

1190287Fantastic, Bajonett. Prepare your self. In a while at least.

Edit:And your profile pic, I love it.

...... damn

That line: "You had just kicked a hornet’s nest from hell with explosives.” made me laugh so much...

Shit gonna hit the fan

would love to see more of him reforming the Equestrian military because I almost thought that I missed something due to the 2 week time skip

2855777 You are in for a treat with this next one then.

Might be my dark humor but I like what I’ve read so far, third read by the way. Will say I do not like that the protagonist is drinking/having sex at fourteen, having to fight will not have these as being interests. I don’t like the lack of information, the ‘how’ is what I am looking for. This issue can be taken care of during his flashbacks. Age of the elements has me pitching a fit. If the show is to be believed Spike’s age is fourteen, six years younger than Twilight.

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