Fifty imaginary coins says it's Lightning. Another fifty says it's not, and you're just being a massive troll. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen to me... I mean Max.
6945229 The fact that you inadvertently made a special shelf for Puss's stories still makes me laugh.
Also, *Smash-cut to Max's date being Flint* *(s)He's also been a mare this whole time*
As an aside, are the artworks fandom-related, or are they for something else? I'm just curious. Either way, I'm sure they're going to turn out awful fantastic! You are a very talented artist, if your other works are any indication.
He used his teeth to pull off his glove, then brought his now naked hand over the still struggling pegasus, making a menacing claw motion with his fingers.
This is a wonderful story so far! I like that you didn't make Max forcibly dense like most HiE human characters tend to be. Lightning Dust feels more like an O.C. than a secondary character from the show. Kudos to you, dude! I am really hoping to see the next chapter before 2 weeks. Your stories are some of the few I like to revisit for just about any reason. This one's shaping up to be your best so far!
6945229 I still can't belive I have a whole shelf on your page. well I hope this one makes the cut. If not, I won't be offended or anything. Not everything I do can be good, but I am curious to see what you think once the story comes to an end.
Puss, bruh, seriously...do you you just eat awesome for breakfast? You could probably shit out a better story than most could try and write. My only problem is I learned about this new masterpiece from the featured box....FIM FICTION START NOTIFYING ME WHEN SOMEONE I FOLLOW WRITES A NEW STORY.
Edit* okay...FIM FICTION DONT UNFOLLOW ME FROM PUSSPUSS. Serious I swear I followed you...I blame iPad since it's what I read on. It doesn't behave the same way as desktop or normal mobile. It says following now...
Well my bits are on the length of this story going by that list of chapters. It seems fairly obvious seeing as if that list is true there is only four chapters left. Though perhaps you got more in store and then I am wrong. Still, it will be interesting to see seeing as you have so far portrayed Lightning as pretty much a lesmarian closet cunt craver. Guess only time will reveal what is fact and what's just a bunch of 'FiM Fiction'.
Aww, already reached the current end of the story and have to wait for more. I love how you have written the characters and I'm looking forward to learn who the mysterious mare might be.
So, what do you guys think? Who's the mystery mare going to be? I am not going to answer this as it is way to easy. this is a really good chapter love it.
Now I have a feeling that all your storys are inter conected or at different times so then they ( the others) don't know eachother , also your storys are an instant up-vote
I am loving this so far. The amount of personality and individuality that you give to each character is amazing (as usual). I can't wait to see where this goes!
6945352 You Are Absolutely Right Pusspuss. There Are Next To None Of Human And Lightning Dust Stories. Geeze Typing A Comment Before You Had A Cup Of Coffee Sure Is Hard In The Morning.
Hmmmm something tells me it can be Milky Way, one of Lighting friends that reject her, because she doesn't swing that way and she was interest because of 2 big reasons (if you know what I mean )
Milky is surprise, but then give him a chance after Lighting suggest that Max could help her out with her little problem.
6946286 Hmmmm…perhaps but so far, she doesn't have show clues of going both ways, other than his dad asking for boyfriends, I mean if she is bi why she only have play colts? I know, maybe she is only shifting a bit more into mares (make sense with the male female population) but still…
Fifty imaginary coins says it's Lightning. Another fifty says it's not, and you're just being a massive troll. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen to me... I mean Max.
Updates the day I started reading? Must be my birthday.
Welp, now I have a reason to stay up. Gotta read this sizzle dizzle. Lulz.
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Damn, you read fast!
Bwahaha! Yes... yes we will.
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6945222 I read fast only when it's a good story. At the rate you're going, I might have to expand your shelf in the near future.
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Thank you! I tried to make her likable, but still keep her to what she was like in the show.
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Oh, yeah I know. I had some trouble with the last few I tried to use for covers, so I want the safe route this time.
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She needs more.
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Yessss! I hope you like the story thought. I felt bad that the last two you couldn't enjoy.
Scary!!
It's kinda obvious it's Lighting.
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Hahah! Aww... I missed that. Sweet.
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I hope you like it! And it will be on the longer side.
6945229 The fact that you inadvertently made a special shelf for Puss's stories still makes me laugh.
Also, *Smash-cut to Max's date being Flint* *(s)He's also been a mare this whole time*
As an aside, are the artworks fandom-related, or are they for something else? I'm just curious. Either way, I'm sure they're going to turn out
awfulfantastic! You are a very talented artist, if your other works are any indication.It's Lightning Dust
and you mixed up a your/you're in they're (see what I did their)
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Yeah! Got to build up that friendship first! Glad you're liken it so far!
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Eep! Thank you!
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Oh no! Max uses an apron! Guess he's a pussy now.
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Yeah that was fast, but it looks like there wasn't much there in the first place.
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I never linked a source, but I have the source in the description. Art was done by me.
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Not sure what you mean. She is nicer in this one, but thats because she's learned her lesson form her episode in the show.
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Just did!
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I know.
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People should be able to like more then once dammit!
I hope the mysterious mare isn't Lightning, so the story can be a little more interesting and longer. Anyway, nice work as always.
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Hehe, guess you will have to keep reading and see.
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You mean, how did I do them in the picture?
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Thanks! Fixed! Also, that clip made me laugh.
You missed an e.
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This was the first thing that came to my mind when I read this scene.
I would also like to say that I really like how you're portraying Flint. I think he might be my favorite character, alongside our protagonist, Max.
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That made me laugh. I was actually thinking about that movie when I wrote that line.
Thank you for the complement too! I'm really glad you like my stuff.
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Hmm... You make a good point.
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We need more!
Max: um, were is muh date, Dust?
Lighting dust appearing from no were: HAHA! Twas I! I was the date all along! *evil laughter*
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That clip made me happy. I don't know why, but it did.
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Fixed! Thank you!
This is a wonderful story so far! I like that you didn't make Max forcibly dense like most HiE human characters tend to be.
Lightning Dust feels more like an O.C. than a secondary character from the show. Kudos to you, dude!
I am really hoping to see the next chapter before 2 weeks. Your stories are some of the few I like to revisit for just about any reason. This one's shaping up to be your best so far!
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I still can't belive I have a whole shelf on your page. well I hope this one makes the cut. If not, I won't be offended or anything. Not everything I do can be good, but I am curious to see what you think once the story comes to an end.
Commence read.
Fluffy white spider, eh?
What does a "mock discus" even look like? A discus made out of plywood instead of metal and fiberglass?
6945487 Ermagerd Puss, I could've SWORN I marked this
Puss, bruh, seriously...do you you just eat awesome for breakfast? You could probably shit out a better story than most could try and write. My only problem is I learned about this new masterpiece from the featured box....FIM FICTION START NOTIFYING ME WHEN SOMEONE I FOLLOW WRITES A NEW STORY.
Edit* okay...FIM FICTION DONT UNFOLLOW ME FROM PUSSPUSS. Serious I swear I followed you...I blame iPad since it's what I read on. It doesn't behave the same way as desktop or normal mobile. It says following now...
Well my bits are on the length of this story going by that list of chapters. It seems fairly obvious seeing as if that list is true there is only four chapters left. Though perhaps you got more in store and then I am wrong. Still, it will be interesting to see seeing as you have so far portrayed Lightning as pretty much a lesmarian closet cunt craver. Guess only time will reveal what is fact and what's just a bunch of 'FiM Fiction'.
Hmm, I think you should remove the 'you have' in that sentence, seeing that she already said it in her previous one.
/)o3o(\ its gonna be dustbutt I know it
I love the way its coming out, keep going dude!
It has to be her for sure, but if i had to guess putting my money on moonshine or dash.
Great chapter. Noticed that chapter 4 is clop so thats gon b gud : ^)
its lightning calling it now
Aww, Junebug totally doesn't get enough love.
*Casually notes your obligation to write a Junebug story. After a Moondancer one~
Seriously though, I'm loving this so far. I loved his little 'Lightning Bug' nickname. Heh, totally needs to call her Twittermite at some point.
Aww, already reached the current end of the story and have to wait for more. I love how you have written the characters and I'm looking forward to learn who the mysterious mare might be.
I am loving these characters.
So, what do you guys think? Who's the mystery mare going to be? I am not going to answer this as it is way to easy.
this is a really good chapter love it.
Now I have a feeling that all your storys are inter conected or at different times so then they ( the others) don't know eachother , also your storys are an instant up-vote
Also your story is featured
I'd put money on it being Lightning herself, but I can never tell where a curveball might fly. Once again Puss, you continue to astound.
One little knick.
Should be 'Than that', aye?
I swear he's a dimension hopper...
Show of hands, who thinks the mystery mare is someone other than Lightning?
6945966 Damn it...
I looked over this chapter three times and I still missed that...
Sorry Puss...
I am loving this so far. The amount of personality and individuality that you give to each character is amazing (as usual). I can't wait to see where this goes!
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Yay! I was hoping someone would get that lol.
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Fixed it! Thank you!
i bet its queen chrysalis!
dun dun duh!
*odds 1 in 1 billion, but im a risk taker*
6945352 You Are Absolutely Right Pusspuss. There Are Next To None Of Human And Lightning Dust Stories. Geeze Typing A Comment Before You Had A Cup Of Coffee Sure Is Hard In The Morning.
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Isn't she into mares?
Hmmmm something tells me it can be Milky Way, one of Lighting friends that reject her, because she doesn't swing that way and she was interest because of 2 big reasons (if you know what I mean )
Milky is surprise, but then give him a chance after Lighting suggest that Max could help her out with her little problem.
Then of course I'm just shooting in the dark here
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Maybe she's bi
Ima rooting for Lightning! Max Dust is best ship!
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Hmmmm…perhaps but so far, she doesn't have show clues of going both ways, other than his dad asking for boyfriends, I mean if she is bi why she only have play colts? I know, maybe she is only shifting a bit more into mares (make sense with the male female population) but still…
Hmm...
Well, given Lightning Dust is the only character tag....