"It could be a fucking cannibal grinning in some fucking tree lining you up in his grandpa’s rusty old hunting rifle with a big stupid grin on his face. His hands all movin’ with the shakes like he’s got the damn holy spirit. "
Ahh yeah, this is a wonderful line. I can see the cannibal grinning, waiting for a meal. Kudos to you, I like how you phrase things.
I will watch this story and maybe learn something.
I'm overworked and have a head cold, so I decided to take the night off writing and finally start reading this. It's just what I need--I can't get enough of adventure stories or strangers in strange lands. It's a pity how few people have read it, but I'm glad you wrote it.
"It could be a fucking cannibal grinning in some fucking tree lining you up in his grandpa’s rusty old hunting rifle with a big stupid grin on his face. His hands all movin’ with the shakes like he’s got the damn holy spirit. "
Ahh yeah, this is a wonderful line. I can see the cannibal grinning, waiting for a meal.
Kudos to you, I like how you phrase things.
I will watch this story and maybe learn something.
i almost died from all these jokes. That means it's good!
I'm overworked and have a head cold, so I decided to take the night off writing and finally start reading this. It's just what I need--I can't get enough of adventure stories or strangers in strange lands. It's a pity how few people have read it, but I'm glad you wrote it.
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Yeah. Definitely yeah.
This looks neat. I like her voice.