Oh no.

You LITERALLY could not have possibly chosen a worse name for this fic.

Also, it doesn't say good things when your summary is a run on sentence with no punctuation.

Fix the grammar in your description and pick a title that isn't synonymous with bad fanfiction and maybe I'll read it. But until then DOWNVOTE.

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He pot his wetnes in my u-know-what sexily. I gut an orgy. "Oh Draco!111111!1 Oh mi fuking gud Draco!1111" I screemed passively as he got an eructation."

I died soooooooo much.

come on now

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Actually I clicked this story to point out the same thing.

This is probably the most unfortunately named fan fic on the site.

I hate to be the harbinger of flaming (or the continuation of flaming), but I seriously think you should consider changing the title. Just look here and you'll see why. It has a very bad connotation to it in the fanfiction community. Trust me, if you read a little bit of the infamous My Immortal, you will lose about 10 IQ points per word. People will come to this fanfic expecting something like the aforementioned fanfic unless you change the title. It's your fanfic, so do what you want, but I'm speaking for basically everyone in the comments right now. I highly recommend you consider a new title. Tried to be as constructive as possible, so I hope that helped. No offense intended, I promise.

6910438 oh man I had no idea lol, I just liked the song. I thought it conveyed the feeling I was trying to get across, I gotta fix this

6908392 I can see why now lol. Thanks for pointing that out by the way

6908433 Thanks I fixed it

6910675 Also, "a Lunar Princesses". Plural/singular error.

6910710 Thanks for that I forgot to use an apostrophe for the possessive

6910658 glad I could be of service.

6910679 Well I read it and I've got to admit it's actually not bad. My only real problem is that I hate human in Equestria stories but for someone who doesn't this is probably a good story.

6912110 Thanks I really appreciate that, I usually just write for myself and its always from a humans perspective, I do plan on writing a purely pony fic one day though, if only to try something diffrent