The second human to come to Equestria is saved by the first, though at the cost of his life. After dealing with the stares, glares and overall disgust in Ponyvile, the Everfree Forest looked like a better option.
6931427 The last chapter earned a like, this one took this story out of my Read It Later section and placed it in my Favorites. Good job having the Pinkie become so horrified of what she did, she went past Party of One crazy and straight into borderline Cupcakes crazy.
6931908 A 2-3 week wait on what? If you're talking about the chapters, I still plan on releasing them around their usual times (maybe 1-2 times a week). I just plan on consolidating the chapters after I've put them out. I figure this way the readers currently following the story can keep up with the snippets, and the newcomers get a greater chance of becoming more immersed in the story. Sound good/bad/meh?
7034913 Ah. Yeah. There were chapters after it, but were compiled into chapter three for greater immersion. I believe it's been... around two weeks or so since then. But you are correct in that I need to get back on task. The past week has been an ordeal, and I won't bore you with the details. I hope to get farther in the story soon, especially with what I have planned next.
I've been trying to find a place to crash for a few days before I move out of state. Finally got somewhere to sleep tonight! And with air conditioning, no less!
Whoow what the hell is happening to Twilight and Pinkie?
The chapters are too short to get immersed in.
6931232 For you, and all the old-school cartoon addicts out there:
-Ru
6931422 Woohoo! My first bit of criticism!
Thank you!
-Ru
6931453 had to happen at some point.
ps. You could extract the message as I wanted to get immersed in your story, from the previous comment. Double meaning ftw.
6931467 Yes. Yes it did.
-Ru
6931467 Well played. I shall take your advice to heart.
-Ru
And now another 2-3 week wait.
Cmon man!
6931467 I changed my avatar because of yours.
6931917 Ahh there you are, now take off your pants and lie down on this table.
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6931427 The last chapter earned a like, this one took this story out of my Read It Later section and placed it in my Favorites. Good job having the Pinkie become so horrified of what she did, she went past Party of One crazy and straight into borderline Cupcakes crazy.
6931908 A 2-3 week wait on what? If you're talking about the chapters, I still plan on releasing them around their usual times (maybe 1-2 times a week). I just plan on consolidating the chapters after I've put them out. I figure this way the readers currently following the story can keep up with the snippets, and the newcomers get a greater chance of becoming more immersed in the story. Sound good/bad/meh?
-RU
6932921 Thank you! It's good to know I was able to make Pinkie Pie somewhat disturbing.
Oh, and thank you again for the like and the fave!
-Ru
6934850 I say that because... 30th of January to 13th of February.
6935998 Ohhhh. Dang. I really need to up my game then. Didn't even realize it'd been that long. Thanks, The Lunar Toaster!
-Ru
6938241 You're welcome Ru. :)
6938241 16th of March now, you've reached your allotted four weeks
Just so you know, I clicked through for the doggy in the cover art. Not to worry, I withheld judgement until I had read the actual story
7034913 Ah. Yeah. There were chapters after it, but were compiled into chapter three for greater immersion. I believe it's been... around two weeks or so since then. But you are correct in that I need to get back on task. The past week has been an ordeal, and I won't bore you with the details. I hope to get farther in the story soon, especially with what I have planned next.
-Ru
7034967 Sixteen weeks and counting.
7377127 <(Eeyup)
-Ru
P.S.
Hope to have that remedied.
I hate to be pushy, but has any progress been made on this story?
7488743 Somewhat.
I've been trying to find a place to crash for a few days before I move out of state. Finally got somewhere to sleep tonight! And with air conditioning, no less!
-Ru
7489530 Good luck to you. I hope you enjoy it.