I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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What's the zipper supposed to be? A metaphor?
6862928 It is a physical tool, with which you open and close the encasement.
6863618 I know. But I don't think you're getting me.
6864173 I could try the meta-phore, and compare the zipper with the EQG mirror?
Of course you could attempt to wash the gel of, but it would be highly inconvenient to apply a new massage for every time you are in the mood, as enjoyable as the massage may be if you are so inclined?
6864208 Oh.
Wildly convoluted and difficult to read. And not terribly engaging at all for the reader. Do try again darling!
7237366 Care to ellaborate?
If you could point out specific examples and suggest actions that may help my story forwards, it would be highly appreciated.
As it stands, the coment only scare of people who may have been interested in the story in the first place.