Deep underground, underneath the ruins of the 'Elements of Harmony', here lies in each cryo chambers that are online. Three human members of a powerful special forces known throughout on planet Equis have been sleeping dormant in centuries. While the country called Equestria is in danger of a new enemy long forgotten, a human named Kimba Cross has awakened from his long sleep in the cryo chamber. Not knowing of what he'll be facing off alone, he needs to learn all of his new training, recruit members wisely to form a new team, and make new friends in this peaceful, yet dangerous world.
First Serious Note: It's going to be the first time writing about a partially military small force in this story, but I'll try my best to put in anything about some action and other things.
Second Note: Could be some random funny things and there will be a human x anthro pony shipping.
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7013010 Yeeeeesh fine sorry if I had to delete the comments to talk about that I do have bad English writing. It's not my fault anyways since I'm doing the best I can on this story.
7015770 Oh yeah I should have notice that. Thank you for the tip lad!
7015857 Okay now I just fixed. It's not much of a short description, but it will do, what do you think?
7018691 Hmmmmmm that is an interest point there. Yeah I could make it more shorter story description, but not too short cause it could be tougher to get an idea exactly. Also though, the story will have some swearing (like bad languages damn or fuck, but not going too far just in case) in less than or more chapters. I also put in the anthro humanized ponies here in this story cause it'll be interesting to see how it turns out rather than having to put in regular ponies. Like a human x anthro pony shipping, but I won't be putting in any scenes of sex or clops or something like that cause those are not my way to write about it, no way!
7019198 Thank you
and yeah it is different with humans that don't have magic, horns, wings, hooves, and no tail. Course the anthro ponies have those ones, but they do actually stand on two hooves and they do have hands to be more specific. Anyways though, I got to focus on new chapters to fill in now and continue later. Could take about less than a week to start off, ya never know. 
interesting i like it keep it up
7020137 Sure thing, there's going to be more shocks and surprises either way.
some advice find a proofreader to help with catching the grammar errors other that the minor errors it was good