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Very....odd? Not really sure how to put this.
It was awesome don't get me wrong. It's just that it felt like the diaolgue was like...short and..forced I guess? I don't really know. It's just that while reading it, the chapter was great and the content was. But it just had a wierd feeling that made it feel off I guess? Until I figure this out this whole point is invalid
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So don't worry about it unless others say the same thing. Just thought I would get it out there for you the author to consider and to see if anyone else felt this way? I still have no idea what it is that felt off about it. Going to re-read a few times to see.
Hell I might not even find anything and its just me ![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
ANYWAYS on a different note I loved it! I love the little confession of LLOVVEEE
there in the beginning. His reactions to what twilight says are totally warranted. ![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
6831737 I think it feels rushed, maybe? I had this really intense workout today at practice, so I was really tired while writing this. I think it was just a little rushed if you ask me. Next one should be a lot better though![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
We are nearing the end of the story... one thing, WHERE THE FUCK HAS THE GOVERMENT BEEN!?!?!?!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
6831997 I'm nowhere near the end, whatchu talkin' bout?
6832049 answer the second question... plz.
6832050 They... might come into play soon![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Don't tell anyone
6831748 Hey man no worries it was really awesome chapter, it just felt a bit rushed as you said. Regardless I love where this story is heading
I'm loving your work good sir I can't wait for the next chapter!
6832049 number of times fave'd has now risen to THREE!
Oh boy. This is going to be great!
my quote from this chap. I loved this man! I know I said that ipad going to read it on Saturday, but I couldn't wait. So I grabbed the family iPad and read this. Can't wait for more now that it is going to be a three day weekend, at least for me.
So... rainbow is gonna be disloyal to her friends?
This mean the element of loyalty is gonna break?!?
Brain exe. is still rebooting...
I smell a little argument!! so exciting!!
I can feel the tension
Aaand, you threw up the verb "to be" to the trash![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
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6831997 i agree its been to long without government involvement.
6831997 Planning. Observing. Calculating.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
6831997
Exactly! You know that the real life MiB would have been "sanitizing" that impact site that same day once the cops found that capsule open and that whole house including occupants would have been locked down faster than Pinkie Pie can setup a party with her party-canon.