6729265 Well, if there are pictures in the journal, wouldn't Adagio's hairband be in there? I mean, she oozes sexuality. And if say... Luna, the more forward thinking of the two Principals, if she wore it to see how it looked, it'd possess her, making her usually conservative sweater and jeans into thin tee, leggings, and a vest. Her orthopedic flats into high-heels, and her hair from free flowing to a column of smoky blue mist (like NMN's) and instead of holding her tongue, she'd say what came to her mind and be aggressive and act like a temptress.
I have like 16 ideas for others, if you want to read.
Quick tip: You keep switching from past to present tense throughout the story. It's usually better to pick one and stick with that!
Anyway, Celestia thought the womens' proportions were ridiculous, but there were men drawn in the book as well. Did they look normal? Is it just going to affect girls or both genders? Or are they boys going to changed to not notice what's going on with their female classmates and teachers?
6732563 Glad to hear that.^^ Like how we made her as a bimbo? Though still a bimbo, she's not a vapid bimbo like most bimbo transformations make. XD She keeps a bit of her original self via that wisdom of hers.
6732697 The notebook focused more on the girls involved, so the changes are either on females... or into females. And as Sunset proved, it's possible to notice the changes... if you're not the victim being changed, that is.
6732812 I'll be honest, you had me going thinking that Luna was going to get her mits on the pom poms, but Celestia is still nice. I am intrigued, however, how you made it so that the items in the notebook were pre-drawn, rather than having the notebook blank and having the drawings been made as the book gets past around campus. But I suppose sticking with a set number of items is prime, especially if their not limited to just one character (if having Sunset eventually falling under their spell *giggity* is any indication).
6732854 (lol to the last bit about Sunset.) Yeah. But, since it's a box, it's possible to have other items beneath the more visible ones she noticed. So, we haven't decided all the stuff yet. Easier said than done sometimes, eh? XD Though, we already have ideas for some, like for Luna and Flash for certain.
6733276 Yep. Came up with the idea, my friend here accepted the idea and wrote most of it thereafter. Helped out here and there, but he did most of the work. I mainly just proofread thereafter.
...what is tgs? I mean, I think that tfs are titfucks (think being a big word), but I haven't the faintest clue what tgs could mean.
Kinda silly, no? Putting up warning tags without some readers knowing what they mean... Or maybe this is just me specifically not knowing what these terms mean, sigh.
7058458 Triggered or what? Nobody cares, this Is a fetishfic and It doesn't represent the views and/or opinions of either the author or the people that read and/or like It.
HA! I like this so far, And I can't help but hear Celly's voice in like the girl's in this:
Hmm... And I like the Scoots in this. I'll start on the... hairband (Of Adagio's, since she'd be in it and... Luna would use it.)
6729101 Hairband? What hairband? XD And glad you liked it. XD We both worked hard on it. XD
6729101 Glad you like it, and like Regreme said what hairband?
6729260 It's great!
6729265 Well, if there are pictures in the journal, wouldn't Adagio's hairband be in there? I mean, she oozes sexuality. And if say... Luna, the more forward thinking of the two Principals, if she wore it to see how it looked, it'd possess her, making her usually conservative sweater and jeans into thin tee, leggings, and a vest. Her orthopedic flats into high-heels, and her hair from free flowing to a column of smoky blue mist (like NMN's) and instead of holding her tongue, she'd say what came to her mind and be aggressive and act like a temptress.
I have like 16 ideas for others, if you want to read.
6731541 Nice idea, we'll take it into consideration.
Also if you what to suggest ideas just pm me with the character, an item and what would happen. And please be specific.
6731541 We already had plans for Luna's, but we're open to hearing suggestions.
6731598 Okay, thanks!
6731601 Thank you.
Well, this was fucking great!
6732495 Both for the most part
Hey, wait a minute...
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I thought I recognized this plot from somewhere! So, now's an officially posted story! You now have my attention.
6732436 Glad you like it.^^ As you can tell though, Celly isn't a vapid bimbo. She still has a bit of her old self with her wisdom, eh?^_^
I guess Celestia found the D-Note.
And no, the 'D' doesn't stand for death.
Quick tip: You keep switching from past to present tense throughout the story. It's usually better to pick one and stick with that!
Anyway, Celestia thought the womens' proportions were ridiculous, but there were men drawn in the book as well. Did they look normal? Is it just going to affect girls or both genders? Or are they boys going to changed to not notice what's going on with their female classmates and teachers?
6732697 maybe we'll see in the future and thanks for the tip
6732563 Glad to hear that.^^ Like how we made her as a bimbo? Though still a bimbo, she's not a vapid bimbo like most bimbo transformations make. XD She keeps a bit of her original self via that wisdom of hers.
6732697 The notebook focused more on the girls involved, so the changes are either on females... or into females. And as Sunset proved, it's possible to notice the changes... if you're not the victim being changed, that is.
6732812 I'll be honest, you had me going thinking that Luna was going to get her mits on the pom poms, but Celestia is still nice. I am intrigued, however, how you made it so that the items in the notebook were pre-drawn, rather than having the notebook blank and having the drawings been made as the book gets past around campus. But I suppose sticking with a set number of items is prime, especially if their not limited to just one character (if having Sunset eventually falling under their spell *giggity* is any indication).
6732854 (lol to the last bit about Sunset.) Yeah. But, since it's a box, it's possible to have other items beneath the more visible ones she noticed. So, we haven't decided all the stuff yet. Easier said than done sometimes, eh? XD Though, we already have ideas for some, like for Luna and Flash for certain.
6732568 Yup! Loving it so far! Are you the Editor?
6733276 Yep. Came up with the idea, my friend here accepted the idea and wrote most of it thereafter. Helped out here and there, but he did most of the work. I mainly just proofread thereafter.
6733280 Sounds good to me!
6733296 Heh. We got ideas for what to have Luna and Flash change as. But, still open to suggestions for other options.
6733300 I got plenty. Please, let me know if you desire my opinions.
6733309 Just send a note, and we'll hear them out.
6733309 As my friend said send your ideas. We appreciate them
6735764 lol Can't blame you in the slightest.
6736124 Can't blame you in the slightest. Helps that she can be surprisingly wise and kind on top of it, eh?
6736153 XD
YES, I've been waiting for this story, and SO worth it
6736480 lol Glad you think so. Like what we did to Celestia?
6736586 I'll answer with another question, is Rarity the biggest drama queen?
6736605 lol Well, did you like how we didn't make her vapid though?^^
6736611 i.imgur.com/3V6kSs8.gif
6736630 lol ^_^
This. Is. Priceless.
...what is tgs? I mean, I think that tfs are titfucks (think being a big word), but I haven't the faintest clue what tgs could mean.
Kinda silly, no? Putting up warning tags without some readers knowing what they mean...
Or maybe this is just me specifically not knowing what these terms mean, sigh.
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It's not just you, bro. I can't even remember ever seeing tfs or tgs before.
so this story is about reducing good postive female characters to sex starved bimbos
WTF
7058458 Triggered or what? Nobody cares, this Is a fetishfic and It doesn't represent the views and/or opinions of either the author or the people that read and/or like It.
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May be late but TF is transformation and TG is transgender which is just the characters gender swapping