Chapter 2: Explanations and a bit of Chaos
3rd Person POV
Twilight glared at the armored being in front of her.
"Tell me how you know about me and my friends!" She growled, powering up her horn at the same time.
Sasha sighed, then spoke.
"On our world, you and your friends are a in a cartoon, a source of entertainment for humans, you're all made up. Same thing with what Sebaste and I are wearing, it's from two different games that humans made up." He said.
Twilight was surprised to hear this.
"So in your world, we're made up?" She asked in disbelief.
"Yes, you see, where we come from, ponies don't talk, like at all. " Sebaste spoke up
Twilight sighed. "Well, let's get out of here. The Everfree Forest isn't the safest place to be in."
"That's where we are?" Sebastian asked
Twilight nodded.
"What happened that ended with you getting surrounded by those wolves?" He asked
"I was returning from Zecora's hut when they came out of nowhere, I ended up getting chased off the path." She replied
With that, the two armored humans and Twilight moved on.
1st Person POV - Sebaste
We entered into a well worn path in the forest, and just as Twilight turned to lead us to Ponyvillle, my HUD picked up five contacts coming towards us, next thing I knew, I feel bullets flying past me!
"What was...!" I started to say, but Sasha cut me off.
"Chaos Marines! Get down!" He shouted. He then returned fire at our assailants.
Suddenly a blue blur zipped past him and sent a Chaos marine flying.
"Twi! Go, me and the others will deal with these freaks!" A familiar raspy voice yelled.
"Rainbow! Don't be stupid!" Twilight yelled.
"Just run, sugercube! We'll be fine!" Said a southern accented voice.
With that, four of the Elements charged in, except for Fluttershy and Twilight, who stayed behind. The marines noticed them running towards them and quickly changed targets, but by the time they did so, Applejack and the other two were in their midst. One was sent stumbling back from a powerful buck courtesy of Aj, but as she was delivering the buck, another marine slammed the stock of his Bolter into Rarity, knocking her out.
The marine that Rainbow had sent flying charged towards her, catching her off guard, and punched her on her left wing, causing it to snap and making her cry out in pain. Pinkie had pulled out her Party Cannon ( how she managed to do that, I have no fragging idea...) but a few shots from an enemy Bolter knocked it out of commission. Twilight and Sasha provided covering fire, while I stayed with Fluttershy.
Then, Sasha put away his Bolter and pulls a plasma gun out of nowhere!
"Holy shit! Where...?!" I was struck speechless.
"Don't ask, I just thought of a plasma gun, and as I put my Bolter away, it appeared!" He said as he unleashed a torrent of plasma shots at the traitors.
"Less talking, more fighting!" Rainbow shouted.
The five Elements that were fighting had managed keep the Chaos marines hands full, but they had gotten hurt in the process.
Rainbow's wing was hanging down by her side, and Rarity was unconscious.
Seeing them hurt snapped me out of my funk. I thought of a energy sword so that I could dice the marines up for hurting them. I put away my assault rifle, and as I did so, I felt a handle appear in my hand. I pull my hand out and activate the sword.
"For Equestria, For the UNSC!" I roared.
I charged at the marines and slashed at the closest one, cutting him down before he could react. With a roar of "FOR THE LION!" Sasha also charged into the action, wielding a pair of Lightning Claws, within seconds, we had slain the squad in close quarters, though, we ended up with a few scratches in the process. Blood dripped from my energy sword and Sasha's Lightning Claws.
"Well that was fun. But what the hell are Chaos marines doing here?!" Sasha said.
"I have no idea, but let's get the girls back to Ponyvillle." I said while deactivating the energy sword.
Sasha nodded, and picked up Rarity.
"Is anyone else hurt badly?" He asked.
"No, though I think Rainbow's wing is broken " said Twilight.
"It is, I felt it break when that mook punched me." Said Rainbow with a wince.
Fluttershy quickly grabbed some vines and sticks, and set Rainbow's wing in a rudimentary tourniquet until she could be taken to the hospital.
"Can you make it?" I asked Rainbow. She nodded
With that, we moved on towards Ponyville and, hopefully, someone who could help us.
this mlp op?
6715673 I'm not trying to make them OP, Chaos Marines are really tough opponents!
6715680 the mane 6 could beat them how did they do that with what they are shown to be able to do and the warp sounds worse that the stare how did they win if there not op?
6715692 I said they tied them up, meaning they kept the marines distracted, they weren't beating them by a long shot
6715697 how do you tie up something that can lift two tons with out power armor that makes them strong
can they lift two tons without the armor? I forgot but remember seeing it somewhere
6715710 not tied up as in with a rope, tied up as in distracted
Sheesh, 3 likes and 6 dislikes, this is annoying!
6715714 how would I know? you need to make it so people know that.
you make it seem like the mane 6 tied them up
edit.
I misread your comment
6715936 thanks, I'll fix that!
6715624 You seem like you've read a few pretty bad fics.
Why? why the dislikes?!
I like the new part but still
this makes it look like they tied up the chaos marines it should be something more like (the chaos marines had there hands tied with the five Elements they we're fight and have hurt some of them in the fight) or (the five elements that we're fighting have managed to keep the chaos marines hands full, but they had gotten hurt in process)
I'm not being mean I'm trying to help, please don't stop editing my story!
I'M JUST TRYING TO HELP!
6716032 no need to go into a panic attack! I know you're trying to help, and I appreciate it! so get yourself together soldier!
6716107 I'm joking and I have a godzilla fanboy following me and I am a godzilla fanboy just not a die hard but I don't like it when things I like lose but I accept it if it true and the internet somewhat cut out on me so I had to reset it which is why it took me so long to replie
6716312 would this Godzilla fanboy be the author of 'Godzilla vs Zilla'?
6716330 yes, you know him?
6716336 know him? He's following me also!
6716341 did he talk about your name not being what it's is before saying he was messing with you?
6716345 Nnope
6716371 ok and thanks for taking my advice you may have got hate for it being confusing
6716394 Well, 7 dislikes aren't something to sneeze at
6716403 I mean more people coming and getting confused and leaving just because they can't take a simple mistake those are the worst kind of people for a fic writher
Good point...
6716444 I'm so helpful
6716464 yes you are...
6716470 hooray I'm useful but don't know how to post images woop woopwoopwoop
I understand that this isn't exactly shaping up to be the greatest fanfic ever written, but I feel like this guy's received more negativity than he's due. I mean, it's not easy to put yourself out there like that by publishing your stuff for other people to see. Very, very few people (if anybody) actually deserve more dislikes than likes. I gave the story a thumbs up just to try to help balance things out a bit.
Keep writing Halo40KInquisitor. Whenever we do anything for the first time, we kind of suck at it. The only way to suck less or altogether cease to suck is to just keep doing whatever it is you're doing. You're off to a much better start than I am. Whenever I get an idea for a fanfic, I start writing it, show nobody because I'm too self-conscious and then eventually scrap it. I've taken so many classes on the process of producing literature as well as classes like Lit of Author, where we just study a single work or collection of works from as many perspectives as possible and all the while thought about writing stories of my own, but for all the time I've spent thinking about it, I haven't completed a single one.
I sincerely hope that someday, when I publish what I know will (at least at first) be some pretty terrible fanfiction, you'll show me the same respect that I have for you...
Suddenly a blue blur zipped past him and sent a Chaos marine flying.
CHAOS. MARINE. SENT. FLYING?!!!?!?!!?!?
Ok let's get this straight. Nearly 1 ton of mutated muscles, armor and weapons was send flying by pipsqueak who weight 170 pounds at max?
I know, I know, this is fic and ets, BUT
T, lack of respect for details (as well as cartoonish logic and physics applied for Astartes) is killing me. Traitor once is traitor twice. Have a nice day.From Russia With Love.
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Yeah, not exactly proud of how I did this myself...