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Mine. 'Thine' is basically 'yours'.
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Edited. Thanks for that.
6807575 I have some other names for this story if you wanna hear them.
6807504 I know, kinda defeats the purpose of the symbolism but oh well . Who needs symbolism when you're Death itself?
General phrases
Who are you?
Who art thou?
What is your name?
What is thine name?
Just try to use logic to figure out what to replace. If that doesn't work just imagine it being said in your head.
6807559 I think it's more of a word to describe ownership. Like "what is thine name?" would mean "what is your name?" whereas "what art thou's name?" would be "what are you's name?"
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What symbolism?
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I didn't think of using dead spirits. Also, she told them what gender she was before taking up the job. It's one of the requirements considering she's a skeleton and all.
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This is my version of Death and how I think they deal with stuff.
I'm surprised I didn't have Winona see Death but, how else can I have a story if Death doesn't talk to others and let itself be seen by others?
Death was originally a human so she's kept some of her humanity, such as letting things get done in their own time and such.
Yes. Yes I did and I gladly welcoming your bitching, sir/madam!
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I know it's a farming tool but with every Death personification I've seen, it has a scythe with it.
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Thanks for that, I'll keep it in mind for the next few chapters.
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There are measurements in place from the higher-ups in case anything like this happens, such as a sudden vacation, or if they're having trouble trying to find a new Grim Reaper.
6815706 If my frothing, anger filled bitching helps then I can rest easy at night ^.^
6829091 That was my point. I just couldn't describe it properly because I'm bad at words
Honestly I thought of the Demon's Souls one. Basically the same but dat bleed damage
Thou instead of Thee.
add 'so' between here and quickly.
same as the first, thou not thee. Get rid of the apostrophe in wouldst
put 'a' between as and Bunsen.
'Whatever dost thou mean?'
change 'their' to 'thy'.
'canst thou'
delete one space between my and bones.
change 'thou' to 'thee'
Thee and thou are both used for you. The difference is placement in a sentence. 'Thou art to do nothing. We shouldst have no need of thee. Thou shouldst know that thine services art not required. Our strength is sufficient that we should not have to have thee aid us.' Thee is typically used in the latter part of a sentence where as thou is used in the beginning. Flow of the sentence is also something to keep in mind since using older english can throw it off.
I really hope Discord is in this and maybe even friends with Death. I really love Discord in stories
It's actually Early Modern English you're using. (Old English is not readable by a modern English speaker and even later forms of Middle English like what Chaucer wrote in will give you trouble with how alien many of the spellings get.)
Here's an example of Old English that's much closer than usual to Modern English, just to drive home the distance:
Þæt ƿæs gōd cyning! (Translation: That was a good king!)
I wrote a quick guide to the most commonly misused bits of Early Modern English in case it helps:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/309807/early-modern-english-for-authors-aka-lunaspeak
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Early Modern English I'll take any day over whatever that Old English was. I highly doubt ANYONE without a background knowledge of dead languages would even be able to write that.