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grammar404


Pc broke down, art commissions are halted. I'll be using my phone for stories and it is prone to typos.

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Rosie Hammer was just out in an errand by her father for the village. Their local medic centre was running low in medicine as the attack from the dire wolves are increasing. Her stay in the newly returned Crystal Empire was prolonged by her tour all over the kingdom. It was before twilight when she head out. She trek the tundra with caution as the night slowly approaches. Unfortunately for her, she had been ambushed by a group of dire wolves. Barely escaping with a scratch on her hind leg. Rosie discovers a cave perched on the side of a mountain. She spent the night inside and when she woke up, there was a little pegasus filly sleeping beside her.

What trials and adventure a wait these two, and who are they going to meet along their journey?


Warning, this story has not been professionally edited. Any help is welcome.

The gore tag is for mild bloodiness.

Credits to: JohnJoseco the amazing artist of this wonderful cover photo.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 15 )

i love it keep up a good work

I like were this looks to be going.

Love Snowdrop! Plus loving how the story is going so far!

This is in my favs, tracks and likes!!! :pinkiehappy:

Okay, just something you should know, Snowdrop is my favorite OC after Nyx, you have earned a thumbs up from me.

If you don't know who Nyx is you are an ignoramus.

Very interesting. Also only error I found was: Rosie resume to walk with Snowdrop in one hoof. Hen from the woodland behind them came a long piercing howl.
It should be Then. Of course, I wasn't looking for errors so I might have missed some.

Anyway, I wish thee the best of luck and a good day.

While I found a few errors, the story does take on the only OCs style well and I am also interested in Snowdrops history. Have a like. :twilightsmile:

6735140 fixed! Really, how did a chicken find its way into the story?

I think somepony is responsible, she probably has this face right now! >>:trollestia:

It's really good, keep it up!

THe ponies really have no clue.

This is too cute to end there.

7000625 oh, this story is not dead. I already some parts of the next chapter, It'll come out someday around this month. I hope the story has been to your liking?

I love the story so far keep it up

It seems like I'm going to have to wait for a bit

Four years huh?

I keep running into books that don’t get worked on :fluttercry:

I guess I should have known that this book is like the Skyrim one when it comes to being way to late

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