When Twilight was born, Princess Celestia summoned a Guardian to protect her, knowing the filly will be in danger in her future. Though, the guardian she chose isn't... The White Knight of Justice one would have predicted. But a Night Lord!
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Why is it that Traitor marines always find the time to do stuff like write a message in someone's blood?!
So I can definitely say that I like the concept of this story so far. It's certainly a unique take on the Night Lords, and I approve of that.
There are some grammar errors here and there, but the most common by far is the tendency to randomly slip into present tense. The only other thing I have to question at this point is how he effectively stays hidden while flying in Canterlot or perched on rooftops when the city has quite a number of pegasi living there.
6753402 My guess is that he hides in the shadows and only comes out when Twilight is alone.
oh shit, you forgot twilight
7149768 oh yeah oh shit is right. holy hot damn.
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when you realized that you killed a dude in front of a girl that trusts you and now shes probably gonna have mental issues