Hey my gorgeous readers. Might i say you are all looking wonderful today...yes i need something from you.
I would like to eventually submit this to EQD, but i have a slight problem. English inst my strongest class. I need someone to help me with editing and pre-reading my stuff. If you would like to help (i only two of you amazing bastards) I would greatly appreciate it!
Most chapter wont be thousands of words long. Just 2,000 or around there, so easy to manage.
Im just asking ya'll before i head over to ponychan and as them.
and as payment you can have 3 wishes, i mean 3 question that i will answer...within reason. What is you address doesn't count.
And sorry for making you think that this was a chapter, there will be one up tomorrow night. No work, so all day writing session
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Did i mention i love you?
I could do it, maybe, possibly....if you'd like to that is
me too...
Ok, these are some mistakes in the text (edited sections in bold).
questions
ask
I'm (not much point putting the edit in bold)
chapters won't
If you would like to help (i only need two of you amazing bastards) [not sure about edit]
English isn't my strongest class.
Those are all the mistakes I can find.
cool. i wouldn't mind helping out on this!
English inst my strongest class. isn't
(i only two of you amazing bastards) i believe need should be between only and two, right?
Most chapter wont be thousands of words long won't
so far, you're doing pretty dang good for someone who's not good with English!
just a few grammar mistakes here and there.
EDIT:
sorry if i jumped the gun on corrections. ^^
725798
You are wonderful! Hell just do what you did here to any chapter you want. Thanks btw
725830
Same as slip kid, you did a great job finding the mistakes here in this guy. I may hold of on EQD because it says no bronies in equestria fics... sad face. Maybe if this gets good enough it will be accepted
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maybe, maybe. if it gets good.
729682
Thank you kind sir! Doing a great job for me!