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you catched me
How did he know they were called changelings?
7388506 He doesn't. Because the POV changes to Twilight.
I can tell you how Pinky works if you like. There is a reason she is like what she is and it is not being just random.
Um... could you put who's POV it is whenever you change? It took me a few lines of pure confusion to figure out it was Twilight.
Corrections that I noticed (I didn't seek it out, so I wouldn't be surprised if I missed some):
Looked down
Just started reading this chapter, and I need to tell you that if the POV changes, you should probably say POV: Twilight at the start of the segment/chapter.