The sky burned red with the fading light of the setting sun, illuminating the broken and shattered skyscrapers of Metropolis as smoke billowed from fires caused by exploded fuel stations. The city had not stood a chance against the monster's destructive wrath.
It stood now in a crater that marked its battle with him. It stood victorious. Gripped in the monster's massive fist was a strip of red cloth.
It roared in triumph.
Something got the monster's attention. Its evil rage-filled red eyes turned to them. And it launched its massive spike armored body at her mother as Celestia could only watch in despair.
“No!” Celestia screamed as she woke from the nightmare. Her body trembled as she looked around.
“Tia!” he was there in an instant, holding her to him, shielding her. Clark had stayed in Smallville after what happened with the robot to help rebuild the damaged parts of the house, and each night Celestia had had a bad dream about robots. “It's ok. It was just a dream.”
“No, this was different. No robots. Just a...a monster. It felt so real. Like I was actually there. It-It killed you.” she sobbed. “I tried to stop it...but I just got in the way.”
“Oh, ok, it's ok. It's still just a dream.” Clark held her until she drifted back to sleep.
I smell Doomsday.......
Ungh man you stink buddy.
Nice work, had hope the chaper would be longer, but hey at least it is something new.
It's okay if it's short. It is still some good emotional stuff as well as excellent future chapter set-up. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
So it looks like we will be getting the Death of Superman storyline. So why he is dead who will raise Celestia? Lois, Martha Kent, or Batman?
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Her vision was of years from now. Just as with her physical abilities and regular magic, her other alicorn powers are amplified as well. She will have easily reached her teens before Doomsday, but she will also continue to have visions.
7085345 Gotcha. I kind of HALF-figured (I mean, I KNEW it was a prophetic flash, but I didn't think it went THAT far into the future). Thanks greatly for the explanation.
7085372 I'm actually going to do some playing around with her aging rate. It won't be too long. I just need enough time to do all the other Superman stuff. He hasn't even met Batman yet.
Hopefully, this won't be as stupid, hammered in, and Anticlimactic as the Doomsday in Dawn of Justice. It's not a Vs film, just an introduction to the Justice League.
Speaking of Justice League, will Tia meet the team? Perhaps befriend the sidekicks easily?
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Superman: *punches through the universal barrier* I'm here to save the author from spoilers! *picks her up and flies away*
Celestia: Pops! You're only supposed to carry Lois like that!
I'm going to see tomorrow.
7095257 it's not really a spoiler if he's in the trailer. It's what I hate in movie trailers: spoiling major points in the movie that may be great or unexpected.
-John Connor revealed to be a Terminator in Terminator Genysis
-"There is no island" to The Island.
-The entire movie to The Amazing Spider-Man.
Hoping to read Superman and Celestia meeting the Justice League... Or form it.
*Batman peeking around a corner. Tia sees him*
T: Hi! I'm Tia! Who are you?
B:... I'm Batman. *Gas Bomb*
7095281 Sorry. Skipped your first comment for fear of spoilers.
It's really more like two stories, with two blended plots, in one film. Hence the double title.
And it would be more like this.
Barman:....
Tia: VAMPIRE! Kill it with sunlight!
7095307 NANANANANA BARMAN!!!
*Celestia throwing random stuff at him*
Batman: Hey! Stop that! I'm not a vampire!
C: That's something any vampire will say! Eat sunlight! *Horn glows and acts like a flashlight. Batman stares. Walks to her and puts a cone around her horn*
Batman: Hm... Didn't like think that would work.
7095367 mind if I use that?
7095426 go ahead. If you want me, here's some other things she can do with the JL members:
-Cyborg: Celestia attacks him, thinking he's another robot sent to get her.
-Green Lantern: Pokes at his suit and says "I thought it was animated"
-Wonder Woman: Gets accidentally tangled in the lasso of truth. "When dad was busy, I saw the rated R comedy movie."
-Aquaman: Swimming lessons... Turns out, she can't swim that we'll.
-Green Arrow: "... Are you a fan of Robin Hood?"
-The Flash: Tries to follow him, but gets dizzy. Or a race.
-Martian Man Hunter: Turns out, he enjoys taking a pony form.